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Reviewer: With_An_E Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2018 02:23 pm Title: June 10: Back at the Hospital
Date: June 22, 2018 02:23 pm Title: June 10: Back at the Hospital
I love this sisterly bonding. :)
Author's Response: Oh good. I have no sisters nor am I one, so that's good to hear :)
Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 
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Date: May 25, 2018 06:46 pm Title: June 10: Back at the Hospital
1 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2018 06:46 pm Title: June 10: Back at the Hospital
I like the idea of getting to know Larissa first, since she’s such a blank slate in that we know next to nothing about her. So I appreciate your decision to not have Jim wake up immediately upon Pam’s arrival in the hospital room. I think Pam could have very much benefited from someone to talk to after breaking off her wedding...maybe Larissa is that person? However you chose to write it, I am excited!
Author's Response: Thank you. When do you think Jim should wake up? It feels both like a copout and a necessary story element to wake him up soonish.