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Reviewer: Coley Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2018 05:41 pm Title: June 12-3: Jim's Room

Ugh, Stamford.

What I love here is that Jim and Pam are so happy that she can’t even leave his room to let him rest, but that’s fine because he won’t sleep because he can’t stop looking at her. You’ve nailed down the best part of a new relationship even if they are stuck in a hospital.

Author's Response: Thanks! This is an element I feel we missed a bit in the actual show because of the summer break, so I like adding it in here.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2018 10:18 pm Title: June 12-3: Jim's Room

Ok, so the question still remains, what IS Jim going to do about Stamford? Looking forward to seeing what you have in mind for that one. Also looking forward to the next time Jim and Pam are alone to talk. Not that the time with Larissa isn't fun, it's just that it seems you've got Jim thinking he's going to want more alone time with Pam and those kind of scenes are usually good ones.

Author's Response: I have an idea in mind for how that will be resolved (I have to admit, it's not original, I've seen it in other fics in the archive, but I won't tell which ones just yet). But they will definitely talk about it, even more than they have in the chapter I just posted (which is admittedly short on that particular conversation). Thanks for your feedback, both now and throughout this process.

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