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Reviewer: Coley Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2018 06:26 pm Title: June 13: Moving Rooms

Those last two lines though. So good!

Author's Response: :D Thanks!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2018 08:50 pm Title: June 13: Moving Rooms

At first I was going to comment about how I wished the dialoge was written differently, but after reflecting I think it works better that there are only those two lines there at the end of the chapter. After all it's a chaper about introspection and the way this chapter ends with those two lines highlights that.

Nice to see Jim get one step closer to getting out. This whole story has been a lot of fun and it seems to be heading to a very nice way to wrap up. Well done you.

Author's Response: That was the effect I was going for, so I'm glad you found it works for you. Thanks for reading!

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