Date: July 11, 2018 12:10 pm Title: Boyfriends and French Onion Chips
Hope you continue this story so! Look forward to the following chapters
Date: July 05, 2018 08:33 pm Title: Boyfriends and French Onion Chips
I LOVE the line about Pam and Roy being held together by string, duct tape and obligation. Stupid Roy.
I also really liked the guys bonding over alcohol and their trying to help Jim with what to do - you don't see that a lot and it was definitely a nice touch!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
1 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2018 03:02 pm Title: Boyfriends and French Onion Chips
Dumb old Roy, always keeping them apart when they’re obviously meant to be together! But conflict is important and I’m looking forward to where you take it. Also, I can’t WAIT to read about the Halloween party! Loving this so far, can’t wait for more!
1 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2018 02:22 pm Title: Boyfriends and French Onion Chips
Oh, this is good. I think you're hitting the right notes with lovesick college students (at least, the ones I've taught seem much like this). I eagerly await more.
1 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2018 02:10 pm Title: Boyfriends and French Onion Chips
A great way to introduce the Roy troubles! Interesting to think that they’ve been spending their break in such contrasting ways. I can’t wait to see how it plays out!
Date: July 04, 2018 10:30 pm Title: Farming and Walruses
I’m loving this story. I really hope you continue writing soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm posting the next chapter soon!
1 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2018 11:29 am Title: Farming and Walruses
Aw! This was so cute. The text at the end was adorable. You wrote them all really well and in character, too, I could easily picture the entire chapter. I can’t wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're liking it!
1 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2018 07:26 pm Title: Farming and Walruses
I can’t wait to see where you go with this!!!!
1 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2018 01:57 am Title: Farming and Walruses
I didn't expect to, but I absolutely love this!
Author's Response: Yay, I'm happy to hear that!
1 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2018 12:17 pm Title: Farming and Walruses
D'awww.
1 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2018 12:10 pm Title: Farming and Walruses
It must be exhausting having Kelly for a roommate! Except for when she invites cute boys over, that is.
This was fun to read! I always like a good AU and that text at the end was super adorable. Can’t wait to read more 😊
Author's Response: I know, right? But I thought it would be fun to write for Kelly, and it is! I'm really glad you're already enjoying this. Thanks for reviewing!
1 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2018 12:00 pm Title: Farming and Walruses
I’m in need of more “Jim and Pam meet when they’re younger stories.” Great start! I loved the little text at the end. So cute!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was a little scared to be writing an AU like this, but this is super reassuring :)
Date: June 28, 2018 11:58 am Title: Farming and Walruses
Very cute. Lots of fun playful banter between everyone here. There was only one thing that was kind of distracting. The "(read: literally make out)" part when everyone is leaving the dorm. If that's what you're trying to get across, then just say that. Like I said it was a little distracting, for me, to read it like that.
Otherwise, very fun. Keep going with this.
Author's Response: Well first off, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Second, thanks for pointing that out! I went back and read it myself after I saw your review and I can totally see what you mean. I'll make sure to be more careful moving forward. Thanks!