Date: July 17, 2007 03:32 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
Very nice!
Date: July 17, 2007 03:25 pm Title: Step 4 - A Real Live Christmas Tree
excellent once again!
Date: July 17, 2007 03:17 pm Title: Step 3 - Reasons to be Thankful
excellent!
Date: July 17, 2007 03:12 pm Title: Step 2 - I Got Your Back
I really enjoyed this chapter!
10 [Report This]Date: December 08, 2006 10:51 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
this story was fantastic! you write Jim and Pam so well! Thank you so much for sharing!
9 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2006 03:05 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
Oh, yay! I can't tell you how happy each of these chapters made me. Pam making additional little efforts to reach out, bonding with his mom, the sweetness of the evening with the Christmas tree, and ohhh, that last one :)
Date: October 28, 2006 09:34 am Title: Step 1 - Jelly Beans
So sweet and good. I loved the part with Kevin. Now get back to DL! :)
Author's Response: Thanks - and trust me, I'm working on DL!
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 05:54 pm Title: Step 2 - I Got Your Back
She was Fancy New Beesly
This made me giggle. It's like her title. I love how he's falling back into their old pattern except better.
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 05:52 pm Title: Step 1 - Jelly Beans
Aww, silly Pam. What an adorable, tentative first step for her.
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 03:28 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
These were lovely. And the last line was awesome!
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 02:37 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
This was awesome! You're such a good writer. (can't wait for more distance learning! come on!!) I've been thinking it would be cool for someone to write a more realistic version of how Jim and Pam might interact following the upcoming merger and this seemed pretty real. I would love to see this kind of thing happen...great job!
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 02:05 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
what a cute funny ending, i loved it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 01:07 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
Oh, the sweetness! I loved this, and think it is a very realistic version of how things could play out. I just don't see Jim and Pam being able to avoid falling into their old dynamic.
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 12:53 pm Title: Step 1 - Jelly Beans
"'Back', as in, 'not gone anymore.'
Hee. That line cracked me up. Picturing it (hearing it?) in Kevin made me laugh even more:)
You are a fic writing Machine! Loved the beginning, off to read more...
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 12:23 pm Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
This was really sweet. The ending got me a little teary.
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 09:55 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
This is so sweet and adorable, and very true to the show. I can see something just like this happening--tiny baby steps leading up to the big moment.
Date: October 27, 2006 07:06 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
Nobody needs Ryan Seacrest to tell them anything! There are so many things to love about this but I have to go with Christmas because I'm a sucker for live trees. I love when she said the tree reminded her of Jim, tall but not too full, and her rubbing cream on his forearms - you are shameless! Another great job.
Date: October 27, 2006 06:41 am Title: Step 1 - Jelly Beans
What a delightful way to begin my morning....holidays, Jim eating jellybeans, Pam FINALLY showing some initiative, Jim's mom (mom liking girlfriend = good thing, or so I tell my son.) And btw, very flattered by your response to the haiku review I left yesterday - thanks for that!
Author's Response: Yes, I truly believe the clincher is that Jim's mom would love Pam - even though she's put her son through hell. I think as a mom Larissa could see the ultimate good Pam does her son.
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 06:32 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
Aww. Cute ending. Add Mary McDonnell as Jim's mom, and we're set. :-)
8 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 06:31 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
that was so cute. and the jelly bellies? perfect detail!
8 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 06:05 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
Very nice, especially this last chapter.
8 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 06:02 am Title: Step 4 - A Real Live Christmas Tree
a tall blue spruce that Pam feared would be too tall but not full enough. ... Because it reminds me of you," I love those lines, they do sound like Jim
8 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 05:56 am Title: Step 2 - I Got Your Back
That's the kind of Pam I want to see, taking charge. Great chapter
7 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 05:54 am Title: Step 1 - Jelly Beans
No candy when Jim wasn't there. Aww
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2006 05:44 am Title: Step 5 - A New Year Approaches
So much to love about this story. Jellybeans, Larissa Halpert and Pam making all the moves. EXCELLENT. And New Year's Eve declarations of love without having them drunk off their asses? Also excellent. What a lovely morning treat!