Date: September 03, 2019 10:06 am Title: Chapter 1
I won't say a lot. But i know that i'll love this story. Yup.
Date: September 03, 2019 09:06 am Title: Chapter 1
SS, this is great! I love how you took us from that cozy, blissful romantic Jam to Angsty and terrified Jam. I really look forward to where you take this. And welcome to MTT!
Date: September 03, 2019 03:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Very interested to see how this all goes down - rest writing style! Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Date: September 03, 2019 03:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow! A powerful start. I’m a sucker for tragic stories so I’m excited to see where this one goes!
Date: September 02, 2019 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mhmmm I like this. Difficult with extreme amount of gun violence going occurring, but it’s a good idea and your writing is great.
Date: September 02, 2019 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice way to set things up. I like how Jim has a vision on how the rest of the evening will turn out. I'm interested to see how you spin the rest of this tale.
Date: September 02, 2019 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting idea! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: September 02, 2019 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is an interesting premise/start. Looking forward to seeing where you take it next! Although, that episode of One Tree Hill destroys me, so I’m a little worried...