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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 24, 2021 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 2

"He didn’t want to have the fight, he wasn’t sure what he was fighting for." This is a good Jim line.

Oooof. Jim realizing he doesn't know where Pam lives anymore HURTS. Although I love how you get around it here. That Dwight. He's a good egg. A good egg who had a bad potato salad.

I love this moment of Jim realizing that what he's been resisting is really his default position, that this all just feels natural to him again. *sigh*

And this ending and them coming together is just really well written. PLEASE WRITE MORE. You know, when you're done making a new human.

Reviewer: MaryESP Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2021 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 2

Loved this d84;a039;d84;a039;

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2019 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love this. I like Jim getting punched and Dwight and Michael being themselves and Karen just getting out of the way. So good.

Author's Response: Thanks Comfect! I’m a big fan of Karen “just getting out of the way” 😉

Reviewer: SprinklesTheCat Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2019 09:57 am Title: Chapter 2

This was so good! You told a lot in a relatively short story, which isn't always easy. I like how it felt - the characters were true to themselves. It was dramatic, funny and steamy. A really great read.

Author's Response: I’m far better off squeezing a bit into a one or two shot because I’ll definitely finish it - longer stories are a bit more of a commitment! I’m glad it didn’t feel like I shoved too much in all at once. Thank you! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2019 05:11 am Title: Chapter 2

Loved the way this wrapped up. Jim was floundering there at the start. Good on Dwight for that phone call. He, Jim, and Pam really do make up a fine trio of an odd friendship and you did that justice here.

I really liked that moment on the couch where Jim realized what he'd done to Pam on Casino Night. Asked her to give more than she could. Great way to write that. It added a lot of depth to Jim's character and the scene. Of course I'm glad the outcome was such a far cry from Casino Night as well. Good on Jim and Pam to get a lot of the big stuff cleared up before moving on to other more enjoyable activities.

Kevin was a treat too. Not only last chapter where he was right there to fend off Roy, but this time too. He may be a little creepy at times, but he's got a good heart and he's loyal to his friends. That came across well.

Wonderful job with this one. Thanks for sharing it.

Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat

Author's Response:

“Fine odd trio” is such an apt description of Pam/Jim/Dwight... 

I enjoyed adding Kevin into this, so it’s nice to hear he was a welcome addition.

Thanks so much for your lovely review - I always look forward to hearing your thoughts 😊 

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