Date: October 05, 2019 07:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Very poetic. I'm glad to see some of the older challenges getting attention! Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks Comfect! It’s been fun reading through some of the challenges - there’s so much great stuff out there.
Date: October 04, 2019 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jenna, wow! I was not expecting that ending. This has such great emotional depth for so few words. Masterful use of economy. Bravo. All the angsty hopeful beats all wrapped up in such a neat package. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks Warrior! It was fun to experiment with the genre a little, I’m glad it came across well.