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Reviewer: boredhswf Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2020 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1

I’m finally getting a chance to read this and oh, how I wish this was how Season 3 actually went! I really like Karen and this would have been a much better role for her. This was wonderfully written and I enjoyed it very much!

Author's Response: It’s so nice to hear you enjoyed it. Canon-Karen was not my favorite, but boy do I love her as a friend in fic. Thanks so much for taking the time to review! 

Reviewer: Donnamour1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14, 2020 02:35 am Title: Chapter 1

Lol. I suppose soon is a relative term...

Author's Response: Exactly... In this instance, I guess soon is now? 

Reviewer: Donnamour1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2020 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

I didn't mean it that way, lol, about your metaphor. But I could see how you can have thought that. haha

Author's Response: I know you didn’t! I had a giggle regardless though...

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2020 03:06 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this. Especially Jim as the Dwight of Stamford/the Pam (really the Ryan). Love the inner monologues and the moving up of Gil/Oscar. Good work!

Author's Response: Thanks Comfect! 

Reviewer: uberkate1013 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2020 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ahhhhhh!!! Fantastic update! The pinky on the hand... So.Much.Swooning.
I hope the next update comes soon! I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully it won’t take me as long as last time to get the update up! 

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2019 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh BOY am I ready for this!!! I don't think I've ever seen "Pam and Jim work in Stamford together" and I love that you put a time table on the position.

"Bring our boy back."

Can't wait to read more of this!

Author's Response: Thanks Agian! I think I’ve read a couple of twists on The Merger where Pam (& others) end up in Stamford, but I’m hoping this is a bit of a unique take - particularly the idea of Pam putting herself in the situation... 

Reviewer: Donnamour1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24, 2019 06:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow! I'm loving this scenario! Excited to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I’m glad you’re enjoying it. More to come someday in the not too distant future... 

Reviewer: SprinklesTheCat Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2019 07:12 am Title: Chapter 1

This is so great! More please. What an original story! And the metaphor is excellent. I can't wait to see what comes next.

Author's Response: Thanks Sprinkles! It’s nice to hear you like the idea, & the metaphor - I’m not sure how long it’ll end up being just yet so hopefully it doesn’t wear too thin 😂

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2019 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ok, so wow. This looks to be really good. You've really got a knack for coming up with these unique ideas and also different metaphors to describe them and this is proving to be no exception.

I do like the dichotomy between Jim and Pam here. They're both lost, but in different ways. Jim clinging to the one thing that can ground him, even if it goes against most of what he used to be like. Pam and her almost aimless drifting. I do like that she has the wherewithal to realize what her old relationship with Roy was and what a relationship with Jim could be. Great introspection on both their parts.

Then of course there's Micheal. I love Sincere Micheal here. Usually when he has a moment like this it pays off well. I get the feeling that this is one of those moments. I loved that he's held Jim's position open. The "go get our boy," is telling. He really considers DM Scranton his family and that shows here nicely.

Can't wait to see where this one goes.

Author's Response: Thank you, Warrior. You’ve really made my day here, mostly because I know you give frank (cushioned in kind) and constructive feedback to literally everything. It means a lot to have you say that this idea/metaphor isn’t completely ridiculous. 

I’m glad you got what I was going for with how I’ve represented where both Pam and Jim are at. Sincere Michael is the best version of Michael...
Hoping to have an update up the next day or two... 

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