Date: October 11, 2020 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
"Pam wondered how many times you could mull something over and still call it a second thought? Surely there had to be a term for when you rethought something so persistently that second thought was more accurately seventy-fourth thought?" may be the most Pam Beesly paragraph ever written.
Date: January 29, 2020 03:09 am Title: Chapter 2
I love the invention of Socks. The rest of this chapter is great (Pam/Michael and Jim/Karen/Josh especially) but the line tarantula line just killed.
Author's Response: I’m glad that line landed! I can’t remember if I ever mentioned what Socks is exactly... That might have to come up at some point...
Date: November 26, 2019 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
"Get keen". 😁 I'm very keen for the next update. Can't wait. I love the bit with Michael and the mints. Hilarious.
Author's Response: Thanks Sprinkles! Oh Michael, he has no idea how well he’s playing into my metaphor 😉
Date: November 26, 2019 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, I am also loving this set-up. I'm so excited to see this come together! Great job Jenna! Woohoo! :)
Thanks for taking the time to review, Clover! I really appreciate it a86;a039; Hopefully it lives up to your excitement!
Date: November 26, 2019 04:37 am Title: Chapter 2
Good build-up to Pam's arrival. They both have such hugely conflicting emotions right now. "What if, what if, what if..." Clearly there's a lot of fear in both of them still. However what I really liked in this chapter is there's the first few glimmers of hope starting to peak through. Not all is lost. That's nice to see.
Looking forward to seeing them both in the same room again.
Author's Response: Thanks Warrior - not all is lost, but it’s going to take a little while for them to get there. Hopefully I’ll have the next chapter up sometime this weekend.