Date: March 11, 2020 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is just so lovely. A perfect reimagining of season 3, with fancy new Beesly and the hesitation and fear of jumping back in and them finding their way back to other with out the horrible angst of Jim and Karen. Just the right amount of angst. I love the metaphors—so beautifully written! All in all this was just wonderful. Brb, off to binge everything you’ve written now!
Author's Response: Oh BT, thank you! Way to make my day. I’m glad you didn’t get too tired of all the metaphors - I was worried they were wearing a little (or a lot) thin by the end of this.
Date: February 16, 2020 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 9
Awww yeah. That's the cheese I was looking for. Thanks for sharing this story with us!
Author's Response: I’m glad you were looking for the cheese because I was worried it was a little too heavy on the cheese ;) Thanks for reading!
Date: February 16, 2020 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
Well, bless your hyperactive cotton socks (that was great! )! It's finished! So lovely! Can't wait to see what you will do next...
Author's Response: Haha, that was one of my favorite lines! Nice to see it repurposed here ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: February 16, 2020 07:27 am Title: Chapter 9
Awwwww! Just awwwww!
*I'm sorry, I temporarily lose my ability to form a coherent sentence. It's the sort of fluff that makes me grin like an idiot, and I like it.*
Pam's apartment! Michael being Michael! Dwight missing Jim! Friendly Karen in Scranton! That's lovely icing on the top of the lovely story! Thank you so much for this fantastic journey!
*Sorry for the number of the exclamation marks, but I'm really excited.*
Author's Response: I was worried it was a bit too heavy on the fluff, so I’m glad to hear it was bearable. I very much appreciate all the exclamation marks!
Date: February 16, 2020 06:11 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm happy for the ending, but sad that the story has ended. You did great job on this one.
Author's Response: Thanks DG! I appreciate it. I’m sad it’s over, but happy I finally got past all my procrastination to finish it too!
Date: February 16, 2020 05:44 am Title: Chapter 9
I loved all the little details of Pam's apartment. Especially good was that now after her time in Stamford and talking to Jim again she realizes just how much it all means. At the start of this story I'm sure she was in a different head space. Yes her space is hers, but now, with a new outlook, she's realized just how much she has changed for the better. I get the feeling she's wrapping herself in that feeling like a warm thick blanket. Lovely imagery to read.
Micheal was great. He's there in his over blustery way. Very much in character for him. I liked that Pam just calmly goes along with him. She's happy so she can be patient and kind with him in this regard. Likewise after her call with Jim, there's a peace about her that's just wonderful to imagine.
I do like that Jim is a little nervous about his return. However his humor, with the canon line, and Pam's reaction to him allay any fears at once. That's the Merger reaction we would have loved to have seen in cannon, so bravo for bringing that to light.
Yes, the storm is past and the seas are calm. There may be more in their future, for who knows what life has in store. However now that they've found each other, they have a partner at the helm. Regardless of if they're in harbor or set out to see, they're right there by each other's side at the helm.
This story has been wonderful throughout. It's been a joy to read and follow. Very well done. Thanks for sharing it.
Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat
Author's Response: Thanks, as always, Warrior!