Reviews For Fun Run Cool Down
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Reviewer: Coley Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2020 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sprinkles! I love you for writing this. Fun Run is one of my absolute favorite episodes and this little peek into what happened after the day ended is so good.

"They’d only been dating for a few weeks, but it felt like so much longer. Maybe they should have drawn out their courtship but neither of them wanted to, and really, it didn’t make sense to pretend they didn’t already know each other so well. Within 48 hours of Jim asking her out, they slept together, and neither of them had any regrets." I love this explanation and I love there are no regrets -- they spent long enough getting to this point, why on earth would they wait?!

"Jim had...moves in bed. He had all these little ways of touching her that made her feel like she might either melt into the bed or levitate through the ceiling. And when he was inside her, he locked his eyes on hers and told her how good she felt and how much he loved her. Honestly, if she’d known it would be like this, she wouldn’t have wasted so much time with Roy." Oh hey, this is my other favorite paragraph. Way to go, Jim.

Who knew ice could be so much fun?! Also, I wouldn't mind seeing Jim's bedroom smile. Just saying.

I loved this! I'm so glad something sparked and you were able to write and share this with us!

Author's Response:

Hey Coley! Thank you for the kind words.  It was fun to write.

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2020 07:40 am Title: Chapter 1

“Jim had moves in bed.” You can say that again!

Author's Response: I felt lazy writing only that, but we know about his moves. Oh yes we do! 

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2020 04:33 am Title: Chapter 1

This is the Fun Run post ep I didn’t know I needed! Despite all the ice, this was super hot. Nice to see a new story from you!

Author's Response: Thank you! It was fun to write. 

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2020 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ice has never been so hot! Sorry that was corny, but I couldn’t help myself. More steamy (melty?) one shots please!

Author's Response: This review made me smile! Thank you for the words.

Reviewer: Donnamour1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2020 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very hot. I mean, cold.😉 Loved this!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2020 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

That's what you call a cool down? Seems like they were just warming up. Seriously though, good job for getting back into the swing of writing.

Lots of fun with this here. I love that they can play like this with each other. Shows they trust each other to experiment a bit, but they're also careful with each other keep things fun and sexy.

Great descriptions throughout.

Author's Response: Thanks warrior! You got exactly what I was trying to show - the relationship they have that is intimate but fun too.

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