Date: June 13, 2021 08:31 pm Title: Fog of War
Some really fun Pam and Jim banter here. You've got all the players very much in character, even Roy.
I love the line tell her she's the prettiest. I mean coming from the guy who apologizes by tickling it completely seemed like something he would say.
Jim's deadpan candor in the talking head was great too and as I said earlier, the Jim and Pam banter was a lot of fun.and her ranking of dog and best friend was so sweet.
Date: January 21, 2021 04:33 pm Title: Fog of War
the seeing eye dog bit is adorable! Pam definitely should have broken up with Roy right then!
1 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2020 08:46 am Title: Fog of War
Such a great update!
The way Roy reacted here is both hilarious (seriously, did he think that Pam just overreacted?) and sad (was he so insensitive in their relationships as he showed it in this scene?).
And the exchange between Pam and Jim was so nice! I like that even in the darkest hours, they still could joke and laugh. It's lovely!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad that you like how Roy is potrayed! As far as Jim and Pam having a laugh, I don't know what I'd do with myself if they weren't allowed to. Thankfully I'm the writer, so I make the rules here.
Thanks for reviewing!
1 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2020 01:13 am Title: Fog of War
It feels weird to say because it goes against the grain, but I loved your Roy here. He’s so well written. Just the right amount of cluelessness. Jim and Pam were very sweet too!
Author's Response:
Well, I don't think it's weird to say that you love Roy for being an oaf. Anything that get's Pam out of that relationship, right?
I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reviewing!
1 [Report This]Date: April 20, 2020 07:06 pm Title: Fog of War
Aww...I love that seeing eye dog thing. And 10/10 for Jim delivering Roy's message without actually trying to patch things up between Pam and Roy.
Also I really hope this doesn't go into a Pam-dates-OC situation, but I'm excited to see whatever else you decide to put them through.
Author's Response:
Well, I for one think Pam needs a dog now. Who would've thought that would become one of the goals of this fic?
I promise you that I am too lazy to invent an OC to sweep Pam off her feet, let alone figure out how that would work.
Thanks for your review, see you next time!
Date: April 20, 2020 05:34 pm Title: Fog of War
Dense Roy being dense is such a great way to characterize him here. I mean he's a walking stereotype of guys not getting a hint.
Loved Jim doing his best to not only stave off invasive questions from the film crew, but also to go find Pam. I love that he just knows that what she needs right now is a friend and support.
Lovely banter between the two of them as well. Really looking forward to seeing how this all pans out.
Author's Response:
Well, admittedly I am not a Roy fan. S3 Roy was kinda alright, bit looking back at S1 and 2 Roy reminds me that his baseline in the relationship is pretty abysmal.
The thing I love about Jam is that they are best friends first, so I like to imagine that Jim knows how to help pam with Roy problems by now, especially after that talking head to the effect that he has before.
Thanks for your feedback! I look forward to writing more for you folks.
1 [Report This]Date: April 20, 2020 02:55 pm Title: Fog of War
I spent most of this chapter with a smile on my face and thinking, "awwww". I love how you're setting this story up. You can still go so many different directions, but I love it regardless!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad I could make you smile!