Reviews For Pam 6.0
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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2020 11:35 am Title: Scar Tissue

No wonder that Pam's mom heard a lot about Jim. But Pam's dad? Meeting with parents could be awkward, but here it happened so smoothly... very nice!
Also, it would be lovely to see Pam as a pet owner :)

Author's Response:

In my mind Pam's parents are usually in the same room when she's talking to her mom on the phone, so he must have heard somethings. I'm glad you enjoyed the encounter regardless!

I am also looking forward to Pam as a pet owner.


Thanks for reviewing!  

Reviewer: Merria Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2020 07:29 am Title: Scar Tissue

This story is great so far! I like that Pam is getting her life together without the added pressure of beginning a relationship with Jim. But I hope that’s not too far away.
And I can only imagine that it’s not easy to turn out a new chapter daily. But your audience certainly appreciates it. Great story!!

Author's Response:

Thank you, it means a lot to me that you're enjoying the story. I am trying to shift the interactions towards a more romantic vibe, but seeing as that's something I've never written before, I am using fluff as my crutch.

Thank you for reviewing, I hope to see you next time! 

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2020 10:12 pm Title: Scar Tissue

Another lovely update - you’re doing a great job on the daily updates too. I’m impressed with anyone who manages it!
Nice to have Jim meet Pam’s dad. They’re still very much in the friend zone here, but it’s great to see Pam relying on Jim for support in so many ways.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I am impressed with anyone who manages it as well, seeing as I'm laid off and don't leave the house all day!

Jim is certainly in the friendzone, and I'll be honest I've been churning through ideas of how to change that, but romance is not something I've ever written before, ergo, not my strong suit. I'm hoping to change the tone of the relationship in the next 2-3 chapters.

Thanks for reviewing, see you after the next one! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2020 09:21 pm Title: Scar Tissue

Seems like a bit of a filler chapter. Needed info to get out of the way so that's good. Nice to see Jim and Pam still getting on good. Also good to see Jim getting on well with Will. Nice job.

Author's Response:

Yeah it was a bit of a filler. I'm trying to move things forward, I don't want to get stuck in the same week for the rest of the story. I'm glad you liked the meeting with Will.

Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate the time you take to provide feedback on every chapter. See you next time! 

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2020 08:29 pm Title: Scar Tissue

Aww, very nice! I really enjoyed Jim meeting Will and I hope she finds an apartment she likes (or you know Mark could move out... ;) )

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad meeting Will came across well! I was worried that it felt a little forced or stilted.

Honestly I'm forgot about Mark, but I can't help but feeling that would be a little too contrived for all the work I made fictional Pam do to find a suitable apartment.

 Thanks for reviewing, I hope to see you next time!

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