Reviews For Pam 6.0
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Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2020 03:08 am Title: Happy Hour

Oh boy, I can imagine Angela’s outrage at Pam getting a dog. Nice touch mentioning it here.
Good on drunk Pam for speaking her mind, but kind of scary consequences what with Roy being Roy.
I kind of like that she felt a little remorseful. It stands to reason considering that her wanting everyone to like her is very much canon.
As to your endnote, Roy can just fade in the background for all I care, I don’t need a big plot point to make him disappear... But, you do you! I’m sure whatever you come up with will work.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I always wondered what it would be like for Angela to deal with a dog owner in the office... makes me want to do a bring your pet to work day (Which farm animal would Dwight bring?).

Thanks for reviewing, glad you're still along for the ride! 

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2020 02:55 am Title: Happy Hour

"I have a dog that I love much more than you to take care of already, I don't need another."
Ouch. Ouch, ouch, ouch. I have no sympathy for Roy (okay, okay, a very-very liiiiittle sympathy for him), but that was harsh. And Pam, realizing it at the end of the night and wishing to be better than that... oh, so relatable, girl, so relatable.
And the fact that Pam didn't invite Jim... it's nice, in fact. For me, at least. I'd like to see things go as slow as possible, especially if that means that there will be more and more chapters ;)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed that line, I wrote it down and said my myself "Oh bur~rn".

We'll see how much further we can string along the Jim-Pam dynamic before we have a revolt on our hands ;)

Thanks for reviewing, glad you enjoyed the chapter! 

Reviewer: Comfect Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2020 06:34 pm Title: Happy Hour

I enjoyed this. I think it's very reasonable that Pam didn't invite him in--but she ought to think about it, because right now most of the good things she's got are linked to him, and you know, he's one of those things too...but not on a night with a fight with her ex.

Author's Response:

We'll get there, I just have to figure out how! Jim white knighting and taking a hit from Roy standing up for her may be a start...

Glad you liked it, thanks for the feedback! 

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2020 06:20 pm Title: Happy Hour

Pam should‘ve invited Jim inside!

I guess it’s for the better. I like that Pam is taking it slow.

As for Roy, a DUI is good enough in my opinion. Or maybe he starts dating someone else and just leaves Pam alone

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like Pam taking it slow, I didn't want their first romantic moment to be drunk Pam. 

Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2020 05:56 pm Title: Happy Hour

A bit of a filler chapter. Jim and Pam here are still squarly in friendship zone. Still it's nice to see them out and about. Is what Pam said somewhat hurtful? Yes, but it's also honest. Sometime honesty hurts. She could have been more tactful sure, but having something like that is a good way of showing she's a real person who sometimes acts somewhat rudely.

How to get rid of Roy? Hmmm, Angry or Drunk Roy isn't the guy to talk to. He's the kind of guy who punches first and doesn't ask questions later. Sober Roy might be a better guy for Pam to talk to. I could see this Roy storming up to the office again. Or coming up to the office so often it starts to affect his work in the warehouse or gets to the point of workplace harrasment. Both of which could become fireable offenses. Then after Roy's not only lost Pam but his job, does he realize what he's done, sobers up, and finally leaves Pam alone. A suggestion is all.

Author's Response:

Hopefully we'll see some movement on the anti-friendzone front soon, I just have to figure out how I want it to flow. 

I'll take the ideas under advisement, and we'll see what fits, thanks for reviewing! 

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