Date: May 06, 2020 10:14 am Title: Anti-Hump-Day
Catching up with the story!
Oh, like all Michael's ideas, this also backfired on him... and Pam. Poor girl, allergies are the worst. And yet, I feel a little sympathy for Angela here. I don't know why, maybe it's a cat person solidarity, or it's me being scared of big dogs, no matter how friendly and adorable they are...
But. There was another great moment, and I'm talking about "You give the best hugs." It's just... dawwww. And very, very promising!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it, I had a lot of fun writing those scenes. The best hugs line was definitely meant to inspire d'awws, so thanks!
Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!
Date: May 02, 2020 08:47 pm Title: Anti-Hump-Day
The Creed moment? Perfection.
“I could hardly bring one of them in, idiot,” Dwight admonished, “They are working animals, they have no place in an office; Mose, on the other hand, is great at mundane tasks.”
Okay, I take back my review of the last chapter, this is far, far better.
This whole chapter was lovely! You’re a doing a wonderful job of slowly bridging Pam’s thoughts of Jim as a friend to something more. I’m so looking forward to Pam meeting Jim’s sister.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked Creed and Dwight's moments, I had a lot of fun with those. Thanks, I've been trying to bring Pam's thoughts around but without some of the major upheavals of season 2 it's been a challenge for sure. Pam meeting Jim's sister is going to be a tough one to write, but we'll see what comes out!
Thanks for your feedback!
Date: May 02, 2020 10:23 am Title: Anti-Hump-Day
Awwww. I liked this! Good job Jim on manipulating Michael, and I'm glad Pam is coming over to his place tomorrow (and I look forward to meeting Larissa!).
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed this one, I had a great time writing it. I hope not to disappoint on the non-date meet the sister front, as now we're moving out of familiar territory for me.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: May 02, 2020 01:13 am Title: Anti-Hump-Day
Very cute. Nice to see some progress being made. Love that Jim is there to keep an eye on her. Also good for Pam to stand up to Angela like that. Great way to show her continuing to grow.
Looking forward to seeing how Pam and Larissa interact at movie night.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the Angela scene, I thought it was the perfect opportunity for some Pam sass. I really enjoyed writing this chapter, so it's great to see you liked it.
I hope not to disappoint with the next one, as I am definitely outside of my writing comfort zone now!
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: May 01, 2020 10:35 pm Title: Anti-Hump-Day
Great chapter! Some advancements in the Jim and Pam camp
Author's Response:
Thank you! This chapter took a lot longer to put together than my usual updates, so I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for reviewing!