Reviews For Pam 6.0
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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2020 08:14 am Title: Movie Night

Oh, this chapter is great, and I quite like that mutual and silent 'give me a sign' wish. It's a little sad that they couldn't be open about their feelings and intentions, but, given the circumstances, it's so, so believable.
Also, I adore 'The Princess Bride,' and it's so nice that they decided to watch this film. Hope, there would be more appearance of Larissa in the next chapters!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the mutual pining going on there, as you say it is still much too soon for them to be doing anything without the big season 2 moments that they had, so they just have to sweat it out for a while longer.

Larissa may be around, not too sure what role she will play honestly, but we'll see!

The Princess Bride is also one of my favourite movies, I used to watch it with my grandparents all the time, so yeah I couldn't resist, especially since it's one of Pam's favourites too.

Thanks for reviewing! It's fun to track you catching up ;) 

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 09:17 am Title: Movie Night

Love the update! My best friend is a civil engineer, I'll be telling her about your story and I'm sure she'll love it!

Author's Response:

Uh oh! I cannot promise accurate descriptions of anything! I was in the faculty of engineering for a year, but that was for comp. Eng.

Still, glad you enjoyed the update, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2020 09:18 pm Title: Movie Night

Ah Princess Bride, what a great movie.

Lots of really good introspection with everything here. Nice to see Pam's thoughts really starting to go to more than friendship. Kind of a confusing time for her to be sure.

Same goes for Jim. I'm thinking he's going to need some kind of big Jim moment here. Considering this is well before when he gives her the teapot there's plenty of room for something like that.

Nicely done with this chapter. I think you wrote it well.

Author's Response:

I'm really glad you liked the introspection, that's the most I've done of that ever and it took a couple revisions.

Thanks for your continued encouragement and reviews!

P.S. The Princess Bride was my childhood at the grandparents, so yeah, totally agreed.

Reviewer: oncelet Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2020 08:14 pm Title: Movie Night

This is so good!!! I love the will-they-won't-they dynamic interspersed with Pam actually getting a real friendship. Looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I needed some way for Pam to still grow like she did post season 2, so this is sort of her substitute, hopefully with less crying and heartbreak.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2020 08:09 pm Title: Movie Night

Progress!!! Pam is finally getting a clue. I wonder how this will play out. Hopefully more fluffy fun

Author's Response: Definitely fluff, no doubt about that. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Comfect Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2020 07:52 pm Title: Movie Night

Oh, I love the prank on Dwight. So simple, so basic, such a classic Dwightish reaction. Good job.

I like your Larissa! She seems like a good friend for Pam and sibling for Jim, so thus ideal.

And I am enjoying their unwillingness to talk to each other--very in character, but nice to have them on the same page even if they don't know it yet.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, I was really nervous about this one!

Thanks for your feedback!

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