Reviews For Pam 6.0
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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2020 09:43 am Title: Moving Up

For obvious reasons, I'm a slow reader to, but I'm not giving up ;)
I think the timeskip was okay. And I'm happy about all the positive changes in Pam's life and a little sad that Jim's best summer was also the worst. But I hope autumn would be better!
I don't know when I manage to read the next chapter(s), but I'm thrilled to find out what happens next!

Author's Response:

Well, you just get to enjoy the chapters for longer! I'm glad you're not giving up, I hope the payoff is worth it!

I look forward to hearing how you like the rest of the chapters! 

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2020 04:07 am Title: Moving Up

I’m so excited for the Dundies in this world! I like that you’re having a bit of time pass. I think it’s healthy for Pam to have a bit of time single before diving into the rest of her life with Jim. There is no super casual dating as far as those two are concerned... It’s also lovely to see the friendship that Pam is building with Larissa.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're looking forward to these Dundies, I hope I won't disappoint! My thoughts exactly on letting time pass, jumping straight from one long term relationship to another doesn't seem like a great start.

Thanks for taking the time to review! 

Reviewer: Comfect Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 07:59 pm Title: Moving Up

I did enjoy the timelapse, and I'm looking very much forward to your version of the Dundies! I do have to ask: did any of the "increased male attention" come from Jim, and did she notice?

Author's Response:

Glad to hear you enjoyed it!

Come to think of it, I honestly didn't even consider it while writing the chapter. Let's just say that Jim is really good at wearing a mask by this point, and stealing glances while nones the wiser.

Thanks for reviewing! I really look forward to rewriting the dundies too.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 06:19 pm Title: Moving Up

Nice way to bring the plot forward a bit for Pam's sake. However it feels like something needs to break soon. Nice job.

Author's Response:

Tension has indeed been rising, we will soon be at the breaking point.

Thanks for your feedback! 

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 05:49 pm Title: Moving Up

I like how Pam is progressing in her life slowly. I thin enough time has passed from her break up. Hopefully she advances more with Jim in the Dundies.
I have to say I look forward to a new chapter each day. Thank you for keeping us entertained during these times. Lots of jellybeans!!

Author's Response:

That is certainly the hope, we'll see how it goes. The next chapter may take more than a day, but I'll do my best!

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad to be writing something that you look forward to! 

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