Date: June 10, 2020 03:16 pm Title: Release
This was so lovely and wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it! I hope you like the sequel too, I'm in the process of writing it currently and I update it semi-regularly. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!
Date: May 12, 2020 05:55 pm Title: Release
Love this! So cute!
So awesome! Love your writing. Can't wait for sequel. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm happy to hear you liked it. The sequel is in progress!
Date: May 12, 2020 12:32 am Title: Release
My cheeks are hurt. Otherwise, everything is perfect!
This chapter has so many these little cute and not-so-cute moments, and it's so, so awesome. Especially I like the line 'romantic and creepy were usually two sides of the same coin' (totally agree, and it's great that in this case, it was a romantic side) and, of course, the 'today was the first day of the rest of their lives.'
Oh, and, apparently, I'm a heathen :(
Fingers crossed for the sequel!
Author's Response:
I'm happy to hear this one had you smiling as well!
Pam's thoughts and opinions in no way reflect the author's - You're not a heathen! ;)
I've got an outline done for like the first half of chapter one, so... it'll be Soon™
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: May 09, 2020 03:37 pm Title: Release
Wow. Wow wow wow. That was an absolute blast to read!!! I loved following the progression of Pam's growth and the strengthening of the Jam. Thanks for the amazing story!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback, I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it!
Date: May 08, 2020 06:23 pm Title: Release
Nice way to wrap it all up. Loved that Pam finally figured out the movie reference. It's a classic movie and a classic line. They're both very sweet and cute here.
You displayed a lot of growth in both of their characters as this story progressed. Nicely done in that regard. It's been a lot of fun to watch this story grow and develop.
Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat
Author's Response:
I'm really happy to hear you liked the wrap-up, it was a lot of fun to write!
I'm especially pleased to hear that you liked how their growth was portrayed throughout the story, this is the longest I've ever written so I'm glad to hear you thought it had a nice linearity!
Thanks for being there and reviewing every chapter, I really appreciated your input!
Date: May 08, 2020 05:03 pm Title: Release
Love this story
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it!
Date: May 08, 2020 04:21 pm Title: Release
What a lovely ending!
I totally get that you need a break from writing. But we’re holding your promise for a sequel. I’d love to read about all their firsts in the relationship.
Many, many jellybeans!!!
Thank you for sharing this story with all of us
Author's Response:
I'm happy you liked the ending!
Duly noted, I'll see what I can do :)
Thank you for reading the story and reviewing throughout, it was a lot of fun!
Date: May 08, 2020 04:18 pm Title: Release
That's a very nice ending. I'm glad you got us there, and I'm so delighted you chose to share this with us!
Author's Response: It was a blast to write, so thanks for reading and reviewing all the way through!
Date: May 08, 2020 03:57 pm Title: Release
DG, this was a lovely conclusion to a great story! I’m so glad you’ve shared this with us.
I have to confess, I have no idea what was going on with the syrup... is maple syrup not the go to syrup for pancakes in America? I am confused, but I’m with Pam, maple is the way to go...
I loved that you didn’t drag out Pam thinking it was all a dream, and that Jim was there when she emerged from the shower. It’s nice to have them so open and honest with one another.
Looking forward to the sequel, when inspiration strikes.
Author's Response:
I am happy I wrote it, it was a blast!
The syrup thing - Don't know about America, but in Canada we have the debate all the time about Maple vs. Other, glad you enjoyed the scene regardless.
I didn't think I could stomach a drawn out "Is it/Isn't it" plot, so I didn't!
Thank you for your consistent reviews all throughout!
Date: May 08, 2020 02:37 pm Title: Release
Awesome ending! I can't wait for the sequel!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed the ride, thanks for reviewing all the way through!