1 [Report This]Date: September 08, 2021 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
I like this take on Jim's attitude towards Karen - definitely someone he CAN like, probably SHOULD like, and someone he absolutely values enough to talk himself into dating.
Date: September 03, 2020 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
That was a bit of a jump: when did he hear about Pam? I feel like knowing how long that took might be important. But this does do a good job of introducing Karen here.
Author's Response: I think I just knew I had plenty of sad coming, so I rushed it. You’re totally right, and I think I could have fleshed out his feelings while he was in Stamford a little better.
Date: August 30, 2020 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Nice quick get up to speed type chapter here. Kinda wondering if this means Jim and Karen will be a thing or not. On to the next chapter to find out.
1 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2020 04:14 am Title: Chapter 5
I really liked your Roy during the break up. He felt about the right amount of angry coupled with actually caring about Pam. I like when his character is written with a little more depth than just villain/asshole.
“Hearing another girl call him by his last name so playfully again was slightly jarring.” Ugh. I imagine so. Jarring is a nice description of it.
Author's Response: Yeah, Roy has always been a complicated character for me. I mean, yeah, he sucks. But there has to be a reason Pam was with him so long. I don’t imagine she would have called everything off and have it be easy for either of them. Thanks for your review! :)