1 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2020 12:38 pm Title: Pam Again
Oh man, that was a rollercoaster. From fever crazed Jim to does Cece have enough milk to emergency surgery, quite the up and down in moods. Again you do a great job of conveying their emotions, I'm just hoping everything turns out ok and we can get to the cute Cece visits dad in the hospital type stuff 😂
1 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2020 07:04 am Title: Pam Again
Very dramatic to be sure. Not sure how much you'd like me commenting on the medical aspects of everything so I'll hold off on that. I really like that through everything Pam's still by his side. She knows he's not really himself so she's just still there. I love that. Despite anything going on, they're both there for each other.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Yes I’m aware the medical side of things is a bit soft. I tried to do research and make it as real as possible, but I’m sure as someone with a medical background you can see some holes! Bare with me as I learn how to write those kinds of things better! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
1 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2020 07:14 pm Title: Pam Again
Thank goodness! At the very beginning I thought “heart attack” and then I was like “please be appendicitis because they can probably fix that” and then Jim was hallucinating in the hospital and I was just going “Noooo!” This story is definitely an emotional roller coaster! I hate seeing Jim suffer but I really like your writing so it’s okay :’)