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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2020 05:17 pm Title: Jim Again

This is a chapter I thought really showed the value of the dual points of view - getting to experience Jim's side of the delusion retroactively strengthens Pam's side quite a bit.

Author's Response: I’m having so much fun with the dual points of view! I’m glad you enjoy it!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2020 04:24 pm Title: Jim Again

I do like how you're going back and forth, giving us both perspectives. Interesting to see Jim's end of the hallucination there. Nice to see him come out of it too. Onto the next chapter.

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