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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2020 03:46 pm Title: Pam In the Room

This is hard to read, in the best way possible - a really good glimpse of the burdens of caregiving that are falling on Pam right now.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2020 07:24 pm Title: Pam In the Room

Great writing to show the anguish Pam is under. That the weight of everything she's carrying, everything she's not telling people is crushing her. Then that moment she can finally let go of it to Jim and he just pulls her to him and she can finally relax. He's there for her. She's there for him. The road ahead will still be hard, but they're going down it together.

Very good.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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