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Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2020 02:42 pm Title: Jim: Month Two

A lot of heavy frelings in the last few chapters, but I'm glad that things are looking up. Accepting not being ok is a great first step to a more positive outlook. You continue to do a great job of painting the emotional canvas in this story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2020 07:59 pm Title: Jim: Month Two

Just read this whole thing in one sitting! Wow, what a start at MTT. Welcome! And I’m so impressed that your first story with us is dealing with such a heavy and serious topic.

I enjoy seeing each of their perspectives! You wrote in the first one how Pam was wondering if it was her psychic link that made her visit Jim at the office that day, and that’s how the similarities in their perspectives felt to me as I read this. They’re so attuned to each other that they’re mirroring the others experiences even as they’re apart and dealing with this separately.

And I want to encourage you to keep writing this story—your story!—the way you want to and the way you plan it. You do a great job with the mirroring perspectives and I find it interesting to see the little details between the two that have changed and what has stayed the same. Again, this is your work and you are doing an excellent job with writing it the way you have been and (I’m assuming) have intended! I’m sure you know that you should only change it if you want to and not at the behest of anybody else. Just wanted to offer that encouragement from me to you, and again to say thanks for joining us at MTT! It’s so intimidating to join an fandom specific site that has such an active community AND with such a serious departure from what we see in the show, but you’re doing it well and I’m exited to see where you take it! d84;a039;

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is really encouraging! I really appreciate it. 

Reviewer: WanderingWatchtower Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2020 05:51 pm Title: Jim: Month Two

This story is breaking my whole damn heart but I can’t stop reading it. You do an excellent job capturing emotions. Well done, even if I’m sad. Haha

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2020 05:30 pm Title: Jim: Month Two

Great job of setting up the moment. Jim's pride in wanting a good weekend to not be ruined, Pam just wanting to help, the blow-up. Yes they're yelling, yes they're angry, but they're still together. Even through it all, they stay together and they work it out. They're not giving up. I love that.

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