Date: October 15, 2020 06:31 pm Title: Thursday
A nice way of showing that this is a marathon of a journey, not a sprint. Healing's not going to come instantly, but he's on the right path.
Author's Response: Exactly. He's wising up, knowing what he's done wrong and where he can improve. It's a tough journey, but worth it. Speaking from experience.
1 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2020 06:30 pm Title: Wednesday
Always love a good Dadddy Jim moment and this one is great. He's right there for the people who really need him and it's great.
Author's Response: Thank you! Cece already knows her parents are soulmates.
1 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2020 06:29 pm Title: Tuesday
I like this. There in S9 Jim and Dwight really did become a lot closer and this brings that out nicely.
Author's Response: Thanks! Their alliance is a strong one.
Date: October 15, 2020 06:29 pm Title: Monday
I can imagine he's nervous, but hopefully in a good, ready to really figure this out kind of way.
Author's Response: Yup! At this point, all he wants is to better himself.
Date: October 15, 2020 06:28 pm Title: Sunday
A good bit of introspection here on Jim's part. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks!
1 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2020 06:27 pm Title: Saturday
Love the Daddy Jim chapter. Looks like he's already realizing where his priorities need to lie.
Author's Response: Indeed. Daddy Jim is always a treat to write.
Date: October 15, 2020 06:26 pm Title: Friday
This looks to be a nice little side trip from your main story.
Jim sleeping in till 1pm seems to feel right. He's been under a lot of stress and now his body is already playing catch up.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, boy needed some rest.
1 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2020 05:54 pm Title: Tuesday
Yes for a solid Dwim friendship scene, complete with Battlestar Galactica.
Author's Response: You can never go wrong with Cylons.
1 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2020 05:53 pm Title: Monday
Something that occurs to me - how much is the couples counseling going to play into Never Give Up? Is this going to serve as something of a replacement for that?
Author's Response: Not to go into spoiler territory, but yes, couples counseling will be addressed very soon.
1 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2020 05:52 pm Title: Saturday
I like this touch - that a lot of what Jim was missing were things that drive parents up the wall sometimes.
Author's Response: We didn't get a lot of Dad Jim, which makes sense, but it's a joy to write.