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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2020 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Stadium

Such a fun contrast with Canon Roy - Jim's not leaving her behind at a sporting event with his brother, that's for darn sure.

Reviewer: late2theprty Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2020 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Stadium

Loving this AU. We have all the characters in play (including Mose) with very appropriate jobs for each. I enjoy these stories that have Pam being a touch shy but knowing and verbalizing what she wants. Roy being a short time thing that she just sweeps under the rug but Jim is still jealous could make for some interesting byplay later.
As has been said eagerly waiting next update. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you SO much! It’s been a joy to write so I’m thrilled people are liking it. :)

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2020 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Stadium

Every time I see an update my heart skips a beat. I love this so fucking much. A million jelly beans.

Author's Response: You’re the best. Haha thank you so much!!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2020 08:19 am Title: Chapter 6: The Stadium

As always this story continues to be a treat. Jim and Pam have something special going on here and it's lovely to read. Very cute moments with Jim showing up at her condo to kiss her breathless and then give her the blanket. Likewise when watching the game.

Kind of interesting to see some jealously come out of Jim there under the bleachers. Though the reasoning you give based on his proximity to typical jocks also makes sense.

Love that Pam is there to reassure him that there's nothing to worry about. They get to spend the rest of the night focusing just on them and everything that entails. I liked the less is more approach to those scenes here.

Wonderful job as always.

Author's Response: Thank you, Warrior! As I write Pam in this story, she seems to be coming across a little more sure of herself and confident than she is initially in the show, and so can’t say I’m mad about it. The way she assures Jim and is seemingly unaffected by Roy is evidence of that.

Reviewer: fishgamer Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2020 08:15 am Title: Chapter 6: The Stadium

This story is great! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2020 05:25 am Title: Chapter 6: The Stadium

I can't wait for them to be able to be a couple in public!

Author's Response: Still figuring out when to do that, but it will happen sometime! 😂

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2020 04:04 am Title: Chapter 6: The Stadium

Enjoying this fic and the layers this chapter adds.

I'm so happy to see Darryl is a fellow English teacher - through my rewatches I pick up little things that speak to his being a cerebral type. For instance in a season 4 ep Michael finds him (while saying he was busy mind you) working on a rubix cube that he has almost solved. Lots of little clues to his higher intelligence in early seasons. 

Toby's eyes - yup so sad.

I like the way you handled the intimacy too.

Look forward to what happens next. 

 



Author's Response: Thank you!! Initially I chose Darryl just because I wanted Jim to have a friend in his department, and they were friends in the show. But then I thought about that episode where his resolution is to read more, as well as the things you mentioned, and it started fitting even better. Haha

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2020 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Stadium

Girl, I don’t know how you do it. Seriously so good. The fact that Pam doesn’t know football that well tells you so much about her relationship with Roy. That felt so believable, and a little sad. Glad she has Jim to provide her with explanations and fleece blankets. *sighs* Oh, to be Pam Beesly.

Author's Response: Thank you!! :) I think we’re all a little envious of Pam. Haha

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