Date: November 16, 2020 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 8: Field Trip (Part 2)
Some really good details here. I particularly liked Jim as the object of student affection and Pam teasing him about it.
The Michael moment is just so perfectly Michael.
1 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2020 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 8: Field Trip (Part 2)
The National Air and Space Museum is just simply great. Well all of the Smithsonian is, but I also have a small hobby of aviation history so yeah there's that.
Oddly enough I kind of like the fact that Jim and Pam don't go out of their way to sit together at dinner for a few reasons. One, Pam is bonding more with her students. Based on her pre-school year jitters, that's a great way to show some growth. Two, it also means that Jim and Pam are in a good place. They can have some time apart and it's not a bad thing. Three it leads into a better reunion in Jim's room.
That's just all sorts of sweet. The cupcakes clearly to aswage the fact they both have a sweet tooth. Pam telling Jim he's the cute teacher. Jim seems to already know this but plays along. That may have also been some of the silliest and sweetest pre-sex talk I've read in a good long while. It's also just delightfully them.
I have this vision of a Secret Service sniper walking on the roof of the White House. He's just doing his job. Occasionally looking at the crowds through his binoculars. Then he sees Dwight start to act strangely. Now this guy has been there, done that, gotten the t-shirt, gotten bored with the t-shirt and still goes back. However this is new. So he sets down the binoculars and moves to the scope of his rifle. He doesn't take off safe yet, but he at least zeroes in on a potential target. As Dwight does his dance number he gets on the radio.
"Control from Roof, suspicious activity on Pennslyvania Avenue."
"Roof from Control, we see it. No threats detected."
"Copy Control, Roof resuming patrol."
Our intrepid sniper hero pulls away from his scope and resumes his scan of the area. Then he sees the couple down the block silently giggles at the first man he saw. "Well done," he thinks to himself.
So yeah, great prank.
Author's Response: I’m so glad you liked the hot-teacher-sweater-talk, because that probably one of my favorite parts of this whole thing. 😂 Thank you!
Date: November 03, 2020 08:57 am Title: Chapter 8: Field Trip (Part 2)
*swoons* I love how the girl students are talking to Pam about their crushes on Jim, and that Pam tells Jim about it. And the talk about the sweater was adorable and funny and sooooo clever. ;) Their prank on Dwight was a hoot. I could totally see something like that being on the show. Well done, lady. Guess I gotta get an update on my story out ASAP as possible now! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you!! Yes, please forget about your midterms and give the people what they want! ;)
Date: November 03, 2020 08:54 am Title: Chapter 8: Field Trip (Part 2)
Aw poor Dwight! I feel bad for laughing! But Jim and Pam, soooo ridiculously sweet!
Author's Response: Haha don’t feel bad, he probably deserved it. 😂