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Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2020 06:35 am Title: Chapter 16: For Forever

Oooooh WW - I had to share this -

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mK0RBH5yI-A

So I found these fake PSAs from the cast - this was the one I shared in notes of my latest fic -

 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yUydgDGjmf8&list=PL2AC5C9CF05E8BC1E&index=26&t=0s

fun - right? So I was looking for more - there are some others (lots of laughs) but then I wound up at some real ones like the one I posted above and while the messaging was obviously something else (and important and true) it totally made me think of this chapter. 

Happy Thanksgiving. 

 



Author's Response: Hahaha that’s amazing!! Thanks for sharing. :) Happy Thanksgiving!!

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2020 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 16: For Forever

So I was pretty excited when I saw the title - thinking there would be some reference to Dear Evan Hanson but even thought there wasn't, I'm still glad the title rushed me to read because I adored the chapter.

What a great proposal but the best part was the flipping of the sign - perfect Jim.

This whole fic has been a real enjoyable read- Looking forward to seeing how you wrap it all up.

Author's Response: It IS a Dear Evan Hansen reference, I just didn’t put any more of the reference in the chapter. Hahaha sorry!! Thank you for your kind words and for reading it!

Reviewer: Sam Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2020 09:50 am Title: Chapter 16: For Forever

Aww... that was extremely sweet.
Thanks!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2020 06:29 am Title: Chapter 16: For Forever

This is an absolutely amazing proposal and I love it.

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2020 06:06 am Title: Chapter 16: For Forever

Every chapter kills me a bit more and this one was no exception! It's amazing, sweet, full of love, and just the best kind of fluff! I'm sad to see this ending, but I'm also excited to see what you write next!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2020 05:43 am Title: Chapter 16: For Forever

*Injects himself with one of his cyber insulin shots*

Okay maybe now I'll be able to make it through this review before I go full on catatonic.

Okay so to say this was lovely is to cheapen that word. Because this was everything that word could say, feel, or mean.

As soon as Sasha walked in with that rose I figured where we were going and the grin didn't (and still hasn't) leave my face. Even as a guy I can apprciate when a guy wears a nice suit and that image was great. Especially for what he intended here. However there's one thing here...

*starts getting catatonic due to fluff again, quickly jabs himself with another dose of cyber insulin, perks back up*

That's better. Where was I? Or right. The thing. The thing with the sign. The thing with the sign and the "this is the wrong sign." The thing with the sign and the "this is the wrong sign," and the lines from canon. That thing. I DO NOT CARE how over the top cheesy, fluffy, embarresing, or romantic that was. It was cute, it was fun, it was a prank, it was them, it was perfect. Same later with the toast to no cavities. The humor and wit between these two is just so great.

I know I keep saying this, but I REALLY wish I still had some jellybeans to award.

Magnificanet job WW. This was par excellance.

Reviewer: grc73 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2020 03:45 am Title: Chapter 16: For Forever

Only one word for this chapter. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2020 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 16: For Forever

I was so late to this story, and now I cannot believe it's almost over. Every chapter has been a true delight to read. English Jim is now and forever will be one of my favorite types of Jim. The way they loved each other so fiercely is amazing and you described it beautifully. The proposal was spot on. You know Jim wouldn't be able to go without a small joke somewhere in there. The fake promposal was genius, though I am a little sad that we won't get to see them go to prom together. I guess spending the rest of their lives together is more important though. Maybe. (;
But really, this story is fantastic and I can't wait for the last chapter. But also take your time so I can relish in English Jim a little longer.

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2020 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 16: For Forever

Okay. Okay, okay, okay, lemme calm down for a second. The proposal being disguised as a prom-posal? HERE FOR IT. My goodness, that was absolutely perfect. I loved the way in which you took us through Pam’s brain before, during, and after the proposal. It was so easy to get really lost in the story. Sad it’s coming to a close, but what a happy ending it will be. And we all know this butterfly *really* likes happy endings.

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