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Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 19, 2023 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww… this is a sweet little fic! I like that Pam get to express her anger and frustration. For Jim too.

Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 02, 2022 08:53 am Title: Chapter 1

This is how I like my angst, deep and fleeting (TWSS). So much emotion packed in a one shot. Always amazing when they honestly share how they were impacted by casino night, especially Pam. Jim wasn't the only one wounded. Angst with a heaping side of heat, nice.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 22, 2020 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

“The fractures that had been splintering through their friendship ever since he came back to Scranton were finally converging and now she felt like she was staring down the deep valley they created, looking at her own rock bottom.”
The way I love this line. It’s SO great.

As is the whole story! Season 3 fix its hold such a special place in my heart & this is just beautiful.

Reviewer: boredhswf Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2020 03:17 am Title: Chapter 1

I live for a good angsty post-CN fight where they both purge all their emotions and this is just fantastic.

"a Stamford Jim smile" oh, that is just perfect

I loved this WW!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Bored!! It means so much that you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2020 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ah, I always love a good S3 fix-it fic! So many different moments when one of them just needed to say something - and you've done a good job putting them in a situation where it's realistic for them to do so.

The line about her leaving before him so she doesn't have to wonder if he'll say goodnight is killer, and very real. I also liked the bit about the bandaid on the severed limb - vivid imagery and unfortunately relevant here.

The ending with him teasing her about driving with the parking brake on exactly the way she thought he should have been was adorable.

Author's Response: I know there are roughly one million season 3 fix-its but it’s just too hard to resist. ;) I’m glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2020 10:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I really really liked this. I felt like you wrote Pam's feelings at this moment so accurately, which isn't an easy thing to do! Her desperation and her heartache and all of those unfun feelings are so tricky but you knocked it out of the park. If you wanted to write 20 chapters of angst and heartbreak, sister I'd read them all in a heartbeat! I loved the resolution of this, too, that she just broke and asked him how to fix things, because that's a very real way to handle things like this when it feels like nothing else will help.

Great job, WW! Can't wait to read more like this from you!

Author's Response: BT, thank you so much!! I’m really so happy you enjoyed it. :) I love me some angst, so I’m sure there’s more like this in me somewhere. Haha

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2020 09:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Great fix-it fic. It's amazing what 10 seconds of riduculous courage and honesty can do. In this case break through the final barriers between them. It felt very natural. The anger, fear, loss, and hurt. But depsite all that, their connection is still there and once the truth is out they're still connected and start to rebuild. Good on Jim to know his next step is to go break things off with Karen. There's still some more pain to come, but if feels like he's armed for it now. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you warrior!! I’m glad the emotions came across. :)

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2020 06:50 am Title: Chapter 1

So angsty. Such a lovely ending. I absolutely adored this and how intense it got! Amazing amazing!

Author's Response: So very angsty, but that’s how we like it. Hahaha thank you!!

Reviewer: SprinklesTheCat Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2020 06:22 am Title: Chapter 1

This is really great. So much angst and emotion in a one shot. And the kiss was very hot.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I love me a little (or a lot) of angst from time to time.

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2020 12:12 am Title: Chapter 1

This was SO GOOD. I had to listen to this song before reading, and it's so perfect. I love how the lyrics are merged into the story so flawlessly. "Tell me what you hate about me, whatever it is I'm sorry" That part HURTS. I need more angsty one shots like this asap as possible, please and thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I’m glad you like the song because I love it and the things it makes me feel. Haha

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