Date: February 03, 2021 05:15 pm Title: Not Enough for Me?
You know, it's funny, I never really thought about the directing of the video before, but it actually makes total sense that Jim had a very specific vision with very specific moments in mind.
Jim not knowing the cameraman's name was... oh, very Jim.
Looking forward to seeing how you wrap this up!
Thank you so much!
Yeah, it would make sense that the doc crew would come up with the clips but I'm sure Jim planned out how he wanted Pam to see it.
I'm not a big fan of inventing names but I wanted to incorporate the camera crew in the story. I keep seeing the video of the IT guy (a.k.a. "Sport") on Youtube so I wanted to incorporate that since I found it funny that Jim immediately forgot his name.
Next (and probably the penultimate chapter) is already up.
Date: February 03, 2021 10:57 am Title: Not Enough for Me?
Again I really like how you go past what we see in canon to expand on things. Jim asking for specifics here fits really well. The doc crew may have been the ones to put the video together, but it's Jim's ideas and memories that are what's on display. Really like that. Looking forward to seeing how you portray Pam reacting to the video.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I'm pretty sure Jim gave them exactly what he wanted to see so I wanted a take on that. Next chapter's already up!