Reviews For Blocked Up
You must login (register) to review or leave jellybeans
Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2021 07:37 pm Title: You Are Everything

Nice to get a look at Pam's mindset... and I'm really happy you chose to show her growth here. She's learned that she needs to not let this fester or let Jim swoop in and save the day. (Although Jim's about to swoop in and save the day.)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!


Yes, Jim would always come in to save the day but I needed Pam to grow on her own as well. She took her sweet time but she eventually got there. 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2021 06:41 pm Title: You Are Everything

I was wondering if you'd write out your version of the Teapot Note. It's fine that you didn't. It fits in well with canon that we'll never know for certain what was in that note.

Otherwise a great look into Pam's mindset as she goes into watching the video, as she watches it, and everything after. Great way to have all that play out.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!


Yes, I was contemplating on whether I'll make a letter or not. But I really loved how Jenna described the note that John gave to her so I wanted to respect that by just leaving the content to the reader's imagination
 
With Pam, I admittedly spent too much time working on Jim for the last few chapters that I felt like I had to flesh out everything that she was feeling. The DVD watch, I feel, was the perfect way to set it up for her. 

You must login (register) to review or leave jellybeans