Reviews For Swipe Right
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Reviewer: grc73 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2024 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

This was in the random story on my MTT home page tonight. It’s been in my favourites for a long time and I’ve read it multiple times. It was lovely having it come up tonight and I took the opportunity to read it again, it’s a lovely story.

Reviewer: MaryESP Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2021 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 3

Just reread this. It's so so wonderful.

Reviewer: MaryESP Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2021 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh so good and intense, but then sweet d84;a039;

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2021 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

I like this take on Pam calling off the wedding... I always felt like she probably needed all of the time between Casino Night and her actually calling it off to make a final decision. If she's as caught off guard by the reveal as she seems on Casino Night, she must have been reeling for a while.

THEY'RE HOLDING HANDS. Squee.

I really like the choice to have him bring her into this very private space of his, sharing the things about his life he always wanted to share with her, and how that helps them move things forward.

In short, this was adorable, and I'm glad you took it on.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2021 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ahhh great ending! Very nicely done. Actual communication, what a concept.

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2021 05:11 am Title: Chapter 3

Another great story by WW- well done...
quick review here due to lack of time but wanted to tell you how perfect the line about the glasses was - spot on analogy. And I love the bit where he took Pam to the roof and pointed out the little bits of his childhood...this is what I come to MTT for - these additions to the love song of Pam and Jim.

Oh and how does everyone know my passcode? XD

Reviewer: Merria Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2021 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 3

I’m so sorry to see this story end so soon. It was just lovely. Can’t we get a glimpse on their date and subsequent relationship? A sequel would be great!!!

Many many jellybeans

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2021 09:52 am Title: Chapter 3

My heart just soars with the eagle's nest after reading this chapter! You had so many amazing lines that made their interaction so beautiful and real and ever so slightly painful. I mean:
"I was heartbroken," he uttered. "Not hateful."
UGH. I love it, I love it, I love it.

Reviewer: New Hogfan Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2021 07:29 am Title: Chapter 3

Yes,this was definitely the perfect ending.

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2021 05:45 am Title: Chapter 3

What a perfect, sweet ending. I absolutely loved this and you did an incredible job!

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2021 05:45 am Title: Chapter 3

What a perfect, sweet ending. I absolutely loved this and you did an incredible job!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2021 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

Lovely way for them to reconnect in person. Really glad they were able to continue the thread of their conversation and have the deep heart to heart talk they'd been needing. Lots of sweet and cute moments in there too. Their banter, Larissa walking in on them in the kitchen, Pam knowing his passcode all lots of fun.

This whole story was a joy to read. Well done in taking it on.

Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2021 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ugh what a PERFECT ending. Jim got his answers, and the answers you gave for Pam being on the app and why she didn't call and everything were spot on. The kissing and fluff was just perfection, literally amazing. “You know it’s always been you.” Ughhhhhh. You also weaved in some humor like reaching into his pants pocket for his phone and Jim saying he needs to try some of the other apps out. I loved it. And then using the "it's a date" line will NEVER get old. I'll read a million fics with that line and it still wont be enough, so thank you for including that as well. Youre amazing and I love you and I love that you gave us this glorious gift of tinder Jam

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