Date: March 10, 2023 03:33 pm Title: The Only One
Giving you a nudge on this, it was so good!
Date: March 10, 2023 03:33 pm Title: The Only One
Giving you a nudge on this, it was so good!
1 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2021 04:32 pm Title: The Only One
This missed connection at the beginning is SO Jim and Pam. Always desperately wanting the other to take the risk. *sigh* But just like in canon, fate seems to push them right back together no matter how many opportunities they miss. I love Pam getting the burger correct.
"Except maybe it is a little different because it really does feel magical this time." EEEEP.
The awkward name exchange is cute... and it's lovely to see Pam having learned from experience and grabbing his hand. UPDATE SOON PLEASE.
1 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2021 09:00 am Title: The Only One
I love this! I really like the idea that they're both trying to go after their dream jobs here (even if they're not totally succeeding), and this has got me so invested in their relationship after a few lines that I've been on the edge of my seat every single time it looks like they're going to lose each other. The way you've written Jim is just dreamy, and I'm really enjoying Pam's slight awkwardness - but also the way they bounce off each other, and their genuine joy at being with each other, is so lovely. And the dancing! I've also cracked up at pretty much every Creed line in this, it's genius.
1 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2021 07:40 am Title: The Only One
This was just adorable. At first I was a little sad that they went their seperate ways after the meeting in Creed's bar. However meeting up again at the place she works was just all sorts of cute.
I have the perfect image of her doing her little "ta-da" movement with cute smile and quick dip of her knees. Delightful.
Loved their coffee date and how quickly they realize it's a date. Trading stories, learning names, how she held off about already knowing his from his credit card. Leaving hand in hand. All sorts of adorable.
1 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2021 09:29 pm Title: The Only One
Uuuugh I just want to keep following them around (that means write more, please).
"I get a flash of déjà vu as Jim and I are interrupted by another closing. It’s like we keep being tested to see how we’ll hold up without structure to give us direction." I loved this line.
Keep it coming, lady! I love the feel of this whole story.
1 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2021 09:20 pm Title: The Only One
I was so sad when they parted ways when it was obvious neither one of them wanted to, but I am soooo glad that Jim ran into her at Chili’s (and not into a car). Their little date at the coffee shop was adorable, I love the discussing of names and then throwing in the worst first date story. So good. And then her grabbing his hand at the end. Ugh. I love it.