Date: September 19, 2021 06:43 pm Title: True magic
Really interesting take here. Kind of a rebirth of the young Pam who believed in the magic of stories. Quite the road she traveled and I really like how you alluded to her visible and invisible scars. Nice touch. In the end it wasn't magic that got her through. The thought of magic that gave her courage to fight was great. Nice job.
Date: September 18, 2021 08:27 am Title: True magic
* She knows it isn't about her, nothing is about her anymore. Long gone are the days of walking a tightrope together, finding little moments to catch their breath, aware that their relationship was timed to fall. Now she walks alone, feeling like the sole barrier of that night, and all the nights leading up to it.*
This was beautiful. Love what you did here. Great job!