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Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2023 04:08 pm Title: Firsts

Love this short fic of Jim’s firsts with Pam. So lovely.

Author's Response: Ah thank you so much!!

Reviewer: WithaY Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2022 12:22 pm Title: Firsts

I loved this little collection of firsts! Very sweet and succinct and said it all about JAM. I would love one from Pam’s point of view too! But not before another chapter of Hello Daddy! J/k; but not really ;) Excellent as always!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: grc73 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2022 07:27 pm Title: Firsts

I think the way that you can read this top-to-bottom or bottom-to-top and it still makes complete sense. Nice work!

Author's Response:

Oh I’m so glad you picked up on that! I toyed with which way round to have it for ages and then went backwards, thinking the most important moment was when they met. 
Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2022 11:01 am Title: Firsts

EEEEEEP. TOO CUTE. TOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE. HELP.

Author's Response: Hehehe! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2022 07:32 pm Title: Firsts

I love that you went backwards in their timeline with this. It felt like Jim was looking back on his relationship with her during S9, and I love that!

WAIT, DID YOU SAY SECOND TIME FOR BEING MARRIED?! THEY RENEWED THEIR VOWS?! 😍😍😍

Author's Response:

Ah thank you so much! Yes, that's the kinda vibe I was going for - and I figured the most important moment was when he actually met Pam!

Don't think they renewed their vows, I meant when they got married on the Maid of the Mist and then in the church!!

Thanks for the review!! 

Reviewer: WithaY Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2022 04:25 pm Title: Firsts

I loved this little collection of firsts! Very sweet and succinct and said it all about JAM. I would love one from Pam’s point of view too! But not before another chapter of Hello Daddy! J/k; but not really ;) Excellent as always!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!

Oh a Pam one is a great idea! We'll have to see if I can squeeze that in one day/YB deserves it!

Thanks so much for the review! 

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2022 09:34 am Title: Firsts

This was so sweet. These are my faves:

*The first time he held his daughter and he realised there was another woman whose finger he was totally wrapped around. *

*The first time he married her. The second time was just as awesome. *

Author's Response:

Thanks so much :)

I loved the wedding one too! When I realised they actually had two weddings, I was like, WELL THIS IS PERFECT!!

Thanks for the review!! 

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2022 06:09 am Title: Firsts

All of these were sweet and true but this was my favorite:
'The first time he held his daughter and he realised there was another woman whose finger he was totally wrapped around.'

Author's Response:

Thank so so much!

Yeah that was a sweet one for sure!

Thanks for the review!! 

Reviewer: Robert Dunder Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2022 06:03 am Title: Firsts

“The first time he saw her holding his son and his daughter on the hospital bed and knew his family was perfectly complete.“ - Brb, crying.

This was really cute! Although I will never look at the word daddy the same way again, thanks to you.

Great job!

Author's Response:

I AM SO SO SORRY!!!!! For the crying and the daddy hahah!

Thanks so much for the review!! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2022 05:25 am Title: Firsts

Aww these are all adorable moments. A nice simple list but it creates a ton of fun images. Lots of fun feels with everything here. Nice job.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!! Glad you liked all the moments!

Thanks so much for the review! 

Reviewer: Yellowberry22 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2022 05:15 am Title: Firsts

Firstly, thank you very much. And not just for this very lovely fic, but for you putting up with my shit aswell (the good, the bad, and the big..)

This was a lovely read, from what I could see. To be honest a few tears were shed.

When I take you by surprise it will kick you ass. If you could just give me your address so I can show up on your doorstep at any random moment then that would be great thanks xox

(But thank you again, I don’t know how many times I can say thank you so you know how grateful I am)

Author's Response:

YOU ARE SO VERY WELCOME!

Please don't kick my ass, or show up on my doorstep. This is why I will never give you my address.

And again you are very welcome, you deserved it! FIRST!!!! 

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