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Reviewer: Receptionitis15 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2023 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 7

That was all super interesting, didn't expect this little twist. Glad that they got a decent deal from Lena. Hopefully this will give them a bit of safety and protection for a while though it is dystopia, so I look forward to the next twists and turns...

Reviewer: Receptionitis15 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2023 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 6

This was definitely a dramatic rollercoaster! Jim saving Pam was intense, glad she is okay but definitely tough with it ruining their safe space.

Reviewer: Receptionitis15 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2023 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 4

First, so excited to see updates for this!
So good that Pam is getting to do something she likes for work, a cool venture for her and maybe a port of calm in the storm of this dystopia. Love them making use of their new garage so quickly.

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2023 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

Literally was so excited when I saw you’d updated SO MANY CHAPTERS!!! And jeez, they were all so good!! I absolutely love this world you’ve created, I’m on the edge of my seat the whole time. Love love love it. The only thing I want is more!!

Reviewer: jts Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2023 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

YAY!!! I can't wait for updates! Thank you for writing and I hope you're well!

Reviewer: jts Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2022 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 2

HELLO RACH3L!!! I'm so happy you're back and we've got a third installment of Freedom First! I'm looking forward to it like crazy! Thank you for writing and I hope you're well!

Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2022 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

So excited to see this. Your fics are among my favorites and this gives me a great reason to revisit them (again). Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Heart heart heart

Reviewer: BringingTheJam Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2022 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1

Ahhh,logged back kn for the first time in a while and actually squealed when I saw your post. So happy to have your back! Enjoying this story so much already!

Author's Response:

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I will post more as soon as possible. I have a lot more words! They need a lot more polishing! I'm actually sleeping these days. I could not be more thankful. 

Reviewer: dwigt Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2022 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG!!! WELCOME BACK!!! I simply love all of your stories, this one included. You are an amazing writer, and I am so looking forward to everything you create!

Author's Response: 💖 Thank you for the support. Getting these words out of my head has become a compulsion. I do enjoy it. I also find it tiring. But hey, I'm trying. And what more could the universe reasonably demand? 

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2022 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow okay! This is some pretty major development. I’m excited to see them leaving Scranton and getting away from Will, thank goodness. I’m guessing some major shit is looming in the distance, but the way you write, you know I won’t be mad.

Author's Response:

As long as the journey is enjoyable, it's totally okay if you hate me along the way. I have said so before, in response to reviews from other readers. I'm good at writing trauma and hardship... Maybe a little too good. Fortunately, I'm addicted to happy endings/HFNs, so any character I bend/break will be put back together by the last page 💖

Cogent observations. I thank you for the feedback!

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2022 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

I’m on the edge of my seat already for what’s going to happen in Albany!
Excited for Pam’s new job and love how supportive Jim is
Looking forward to the next chapter!!

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2022 04:07 am Title: Chapter 1

*incomprehensible squealing*
YOURE BACK OMG!!! And with my favorite series! I love the way you write Jim and Pam in this setting, so in love with each other and trying to stay strong for each other amidst everything around them. I cannot wait for more.

Author's Response: 💖

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2022 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my god, oh my god, this story is back!!!! I am BEYOND excited!! The first two are done of my fave fics and I’m SO happy this is back
CANNOT wait to read more!!!!!

Author's Response: 💖 Part 3 is not yet complete. I *do* have several chapters that I'm polishing as I publish. I really want to finish this bad boy! I know how the story ends, it's just a matter of putting in the work to get there. 

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