Date: November 10, 2008 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
no! i don't want it to be done! more, please!
Date: September 22, 2007 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
Oooooo can't wait for more!!!
Date: June 30, 2007 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
GAH!! You made it dream! How cruel are you! Although I really enjot that Jim's conscience is more in tune with his true feelings than his actual self is. Great story.
Date: April 22, 2007 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Escape
That's pretty damn cool. I love how it started off hot and actually ended sweet... Good job!
Date: February 21, 2007 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Escape
How come I can't have dreams like that? <grumbles>
Date: December 19, 2006 08:41 am Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
Are you going to update soon? Please please please please please!!
Author's Response:
I'm not sure, to be honest - maybe in January!
Thanks for reading!
9 [Report This]Date: December 10, 2006 05:25 am Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
I can only imagine how the dream could have made Jim feel...poor guy! As usual, I'm a big fan of Brave!Pam who doesn't hide from her feelings and just lays everthing on the line. And the happy ending is really just what Christmas is about!
9 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2006 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
It was all a dream! I watched "Dallas"- I know these things!
Awesome beginning, and even better ending- yay Pam and Jim! Woo!
10 [Report This]Date: December 07, 2006 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
I just have to tell you that this makes me happy. I adore that you have her laying it on the line and telling him she'll wait - just great.
10 [Report This]Date: December 07, 2006 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
You can't see it, but I'm jumping up and down. LOVE this!
Date: December 07, 2006 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1 - Escape
Wow, I just have to say that I am going to spend the rest of the afternoon thinking about Pam's fantastic breasts and that? Is NOT good for work. But it is a compliment to you and your wonderful writing ... this was so nice and hot and I was freaking out thinking, "What the hell is going on?" and then it turns out that he's dreaming all along and I was like, "Phew," and then I was like, "Holy crap, Jim's having sexy dreams about Karen and Pam! That's HOT!" I could totally see something like that happening. I like how you worked this in with what we know so far about the Christmas episode. More yummy Jim and Pam, please.
Author's Response:
You don't think that after all those years of adoring her from afar Jim doesn't have specific ideas about what Pam's breasts look like? ;-)
And while a Pam/Karen slash sounded interesting to me, I could only see it working in the context of a dream. Glad you think it worked well! :-)
8 [Report This]Date: December 07, 2006 09:29 am Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
Can't wait to hear what he says and I love the title.
10 [Report This]Date: December 07, 2006 08:14 am Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
Oh my. Love the way this starts - as colette said, you do have a way with Jim taking matters into his own hands. Mm. And the roof...ah, the roof. Love the dialogue, love Drunk!Karen proclaiming Pam's greatness (and poor Jim - after his dream....?!? Must've been torture for him [/Michael]. And this: A punch bowl of spiked eggnog had already been seriously tasted, and Kelly was singing You Light Up My Life to Ryan, who looked like he was trying to find a way to hide inside the cheese crescent roll he was eating.
....I snort-laughed, just like Michael. :o)
Great work, moxie, as usual!
7 [Report This]Date: December 07, 2006 08:11 am Title: Chapter 1 - Escape
Cough. So yeah, this works, I'd say - given what I suspect it is from your title. ;o) Love your attention to detail here, as always. (BTW, I've been saving finishing Distance Learning and Eyegypt's Daze & Confused for when I can sit down and read them all at once!)
Nice work here - very erotic.
Date: December 07, 2006 08:00 am Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
I totally love the fact that Jim had a dream like that...so he is a normal guy, after all! And the second chapter just made me squee. The rooftop was perfect place for that scene to play out. Well done!
Date: December 07, 2006 07:28 am Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
GREAT sound bridge between the chapters. And I love the rooftop -- it's like the anti-parking lot! Ditto the part about Jim wanting to know where Pam lived after he came back, so girly, but totally understandable (heck, who hasn't done that?) BTW -- your cliff-hangers are KILLING ME!
10 [Report This]Date: December 07, 2006 07:08 am Title: Chapter 1 - Escape
Of course I knew what the Patrick Duffy reference was for! But hell, I'm as old as you so you know.... VERY hot. I suspected it was a dream but Jim needs dreams like that. And he needs reassurance from Karen that Pam is the right choice. Real Karen, Dream Karen, either one works for me!
10 [Report This]Date: December 07, 2006 07:07 am Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
I like how things have changed now and Jim is taking home drunk Karen as she did for him after the night of too much Jagermeister! But what I like most, is that Pam finally tells him how she feels (throws him a lifeline as you say) and he grabs it and pulls himself to safety. Merry Christmas to us all!
Date: December 07, 2006 04:22 am Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
When I first saw the title of this, for some reason I read 'Patrick Swayze' and thought, what now? Three-way Dirty Dancing? That was quite a dream. And, I have to say, in your stories you really have a flair for describing Jim, um, taking care of his own business (I've alluded to it in stories, but you really flesh it out quite effectively..yeah, yeah, TWSS.) Anyway, any chance this can become a recurrent dream? Can't wait to see where you go next!
9 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2006 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Capture
Any fic with a Dallas reference is OK by me! Anyways, nice work so far... killer cliff-hanger! Hopefully it ends well?