Reviews For The Night Out
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Reviewer: impish1 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2007 01:05 pm Title: It's a little weird

What a great plot! I hope you decide to finish it.

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 06:59 pm Title: It's a little weird

You have to hurry up and finish this!  Move it, move it!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2006 04:52 pm Title: It's a little weird

I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this! You've set up the scene quite nicely. I like Jim's "lesser of two evils" approach to Dwight. I've always had a soft spot for Jim-Dwight friendship.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2006 04:30 pm Title: It's a little weird

A night out only with the guys at a karaoke bar?  Oh Andy and Michael.  Jim lying to Karen?  [Jim]Interesting.[/Jim]  It is a great ensemble piece; can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2006 11:44 am Title: It's a little weird

You are sooo good at taking on the whole ensemble.  I think (hope) I've mentioned it before and I am forever envious.

I'm on pins and needles.  Write more!!!

Reviewer: Rose Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2006 10:42 am Title: It's a little weird

Not only are Jim and Pam just lovely here, but you also really knocked it out of the park with the office ensemble - particularly Dwight, Andy, and Angela. Oh, and the twinkle in Phyllis' eye, and Stanley's perfect, "I am on a call."

Okay, so you rocked the whole office. Still, my favorite moment is Andy's contribution of: "Pillaging." Seriously, I almost died. I don't know why; it was just so Andy

I can't wait to read more! 



Author's Response: Ah... Andy.  He really is one of my favorite characters.  Tonight just gave me a little more ammo to work with (no pun intended ...  "POWWWWW!"  HA!)  Thanks for the great compliments.  I am definitely looking forward to continuing it; I just need to find some time.  

Reviewer: Maia Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2006 09:06 am Title: It's a little weird

Wow, I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed that!  I'm instantly hooked on this story.  I really feel like you wrote their awkwardness so incredibly well. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much.  I really appreciate it.  :)

Reviewer: Treble Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2006 09:01 am Title: It's a little weird

This is so good! and I agree, does feel so much like a real episode! You have done a great job finding the voices of the characters  taking the story in a completely logically direction. I love the cameramen and their almost attempts at interference.



Author's Response: Thank you so very much.  I am obsessed with the cameramen and what they're doing; I almost always write them in somewhere.  I couldn't do it as well as Sophia Jirafe's latest, but I appreciate the kind words.  

Reviewer: Jade Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2006 08:55 am Title: It's a little weird

It's already been said, but this really does have the feel of a real episode!  And because you can never hear it enough, I really loved this and can't wait to see where it picks up.

Author's Response: Ha, thanks.  I really appreciate that.  I think it's an awesome compliment to hear that.

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2006 06:10 am Title: It's a little weird

Ooh, I really like this so far. It feels like an actual episode. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot.  I like writing stuff that I feel could sort of happen.  Obviously, in fanfic, it's more about Jim and Pam (hee) but, you know -- you gotta give everyone some love.  There's so much goodness in the office.

Reviewer: tizzy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2006 11:50 pm Title: It's a little weird

Okay, you def need to continue this...because i am loving this and i desperatly need some JAM longing/eventual hook-up-ness (did that make sense? i hope so)...oh and i don't mean to nit pick at all but Fergie was never on the "Mickey Mouse Club", MMC to the cool people (wow i'm a dork)....she was on "Kids Incorporated" then again maybe you did it on purpose because after all Dwight said it...anyway please continue!

Author's Response:

OMG, thanks for pointing that out.  No, that was just me being an idiot, I think Dwight is a stickler for details and would have gotten that right.  Anyway, I fixed it now.  I used to watch that show, too.  Doh.  

I, too, really want to see Jim and Pam get together.  We'll just have to live it out in our stories for now...  

Reviewer: fireworkfiasco Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2006 10:54 pm Title: It's a little weird

The only complaint I have is that there isn't more. Shame.

I love the pendant, the new clothes (that Jim notices), the kareoke (?) pranks, Jim's attitude towards Andy - all of it. Wonderful.



Author's Response: Ha, thanks.  I already have an idea where it's going to pick up, so I guess I'll need to work on it.  :)

Reviewer: Too Cool Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2006 10:35 pm Title: It's a little weird

PLEASE...KEEP>...GOING!



Author's Response: Hee... thanks for that.  You read ... really quickly.  Heh.

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