Reviews For Not a Panty Raid
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Reviewer: justkaren Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2007 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww.  This is so cute, I wish Ryan and Pam really would bond more. 

 T.J. Maxx - heh. 



Author's Response: They should, shouldn't they? Maybe they'll both continue to come out of their shells with each other. Thanks, justkaren :)

Reviewer: lano Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2007 06:44 am Title: Chapter 1

I have so much love for this.  It's all gold. /Jim

Also: "The froth around his mouth is the worst kind of purplish-brown." hit me in the back of the throat like you wouldn't believe, heh, thanks for that.



Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you! And I could see the froth, so, of course, I had to share.  ;)

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2007 09:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Cute! Thanks for a mid-week smile :)

Reviewer: 69 cups of noodles Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2007 07:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Okay, I don't think I've read anything this funny in a long time...unless you count the first time I read this over at yankeeficswap.  First of all, Michael's car smelling like NightSwept?  Clay Aiken?  Michael's idea of a what panty raid is?  And Pam...she was in on it the whole time.  I like that Pam let it happen without calling earlier.  Of course, my personal reason for that is because I think Ryan can be kind of an ass at times.  But her reason was good too, because I think she of all people knows that you never really know what you're going to get with Michael.  I like their little moment of commiseration at the end.

Author's Response: Thanks, 69 cups! And you know what? Originally, I had a different ending. When he asked why she didn't call earlier, she was going to say, "Because you got the desk." (Jim's, that is.) But I thought that was too snarky, and the other ending fit with Pam's pro-Michael behavior this season. Anyhoo, thanks!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a cute story with so many great lines - I think this was my favorite, though - "He suspects he's actually been conned into The Amazing Race: Hostage Edition"



Author's Response: Thanks, kaystar - glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

okay, it is weird that I find this story to be one of the sweetest ones I've ever read? And I love that we get to see just Pam (sans any trace of JimandPam). Just...thanks so much for this. *adds to favorites*

cheers.

--Lex 



Author's Response: Thanks, Lex!

Reviewer: chicgee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2007 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was really sweet at the end! I always love it when characters who don't usually interact get a chance to connect! You should continue this with a unique-friendships line of fics! Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks, chicgee - I'll think about it! :)

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