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Reviewer: firthgal Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 08:00 am Title: Dwight

Oh, this was beautiful!  Beautiful while still keeping a perfect characterization of Dwight.  Wonderful writing!

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Date: August 12, 2007 07:57 am Title: Kelly

Oh, heartbreaking!  I think you've captured Kelly beautifully here.

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Date: August 12, 2007 07:56 am Title: Ryan

Aww, a very different side to Ryan.  I think I like your Ryan much more than the show's Ryan!

Reviewer: firthgal Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 07:55 am Title: Meredith

Oh wow, that was a surprise!  So great, I loved it!

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Date: August 12, 2007 07:54 am Title: Toby

Oh, this one was wonderful, too!  Poor Toby.  Such a sweet guy that rarely gets what he wants.  Great writing!

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Date: August 12, 2007 07:52 am Title: Andy

Haha, oh, this was great!  Karen and Andy are a relationship that is rarely explored, so I enjoyed this!  Especially the last paragraph.  Great writing!

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 07:00 pm Title: Dwight

For a comedy show, everyone always seems so miserable, don't they?

Reviewer: mandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2007 12:55 am Title: Dwight

for a second, i couldn't think who meredith might be talking about, i guess oscar was gone far too long lol.. on a serious note I LOVE Toby stories, and this was.. perfect :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2007 07:19 pm Title: Karen

I've really enjoyed all of these, but this one about Karen was extra-awesome. I just loved these 2 lines -  "You had been gliding effortlessly towards him on a sheet of frozen glass.  Now your ears are ringing with the sound of cracking ice as your new life buckles beneath you."

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 02:02 pm Title: Katy

These were all so good! Thank you for letting these minor characters come alive for a while.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 01:36 pm Title: Meredith

I absolutely love these drabbles and hearing from the other folks in the office.  More Meredith and Toby!

Reviewer: kataryan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 05:06 am Title: Katy

These were really great, you managed to pack so much feeling into these tiny little drabbles! I liked the way you tossed a little funny in there with the last lines for Andy and Meredith, and the Toby and Jan drabbles made my heart hurt. So, nicely done!

Reviewer: Kath Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 09:46 pm Title: Meredith

To be honest, I'm not the biggest fans of drabble, but I really liked your stories.  The Toby one made my heartache.

Reviewer: 69 cups of noodles Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 05:20 pm Title: Meredith

Wow, this was incredible.  Every chapter had just enough to show so much emotion of each of the characters.  I love that you've used sort of minor characters as well.  Was the Katy chapter supposed to be her seeing Jim and Pam during Michael's Birthday?  That's the first impression I got and I just wanted to make sure.  If so, that is AWESOME.  I really loved this.

Author's Response: Yeah, it was during Michael's birthday.  I'm so glad you liked it!  And I plan to use a lot more of the minor characters later on!

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