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Pick Up Lines by LoveFool Rated: T [Reviews - 20] 8
Summary: Past Featured StoryThis is a companion piece to my alternate universe series. Instant Message format like Mixed Messages (only its set before they're married. They are dating/engaged in this one). Enjoy!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: Baby Talk
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2143 Read Count: 5517 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2007 Updated: January 04, 2007
Reviewer: analoggirl Signed
Date: November 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pick Up Lines

That was so funny and cute and completely in character. Loved it!

Super High by bitterpill Rated: MA [Reviews - 19] 8
Summary: Past Featured StoryThe Monday after the sex.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 657 Read Count: 7223 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2007 Updated: June 23, 2007
Reviewer: analoggirl Signed 10
Date: November 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this. So sexy, yet so cute at the same time.

I love how the anticipation of being together led to an insatiable desire - so much that Pam can't even risk getting a cup of tea. I also love how ordinary things, like a recap of a Phillies game or typing, can trigger sexual memories. The simplicity and realism is pretty hot.

Since everyone's sharing their favorite sentences, mine is: "He thanked her for telling him that last night by making her come with his mouth." Gah.

Summary:

"Who says exactly what they're thinking?  What kind of game is that?"

Kelly considers her past and her present.


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Darryl, Kelly, Kelly/Other
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1383 Read Count: 1589 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2007 Updated: October 21, 2007
Reviewer: analoggirl Signed
Date: November 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: her decision

Fantastic job! I really liked how you've explored this side of Kelly.

I've always felt that there was more to her, after seeing her transformation from Season 1. In the early episodes, pre-Ryan, Kelly wore high-collared blouses (albeit garish in colour), and spoke solemnly. I think the writers wanted her to have a distinctive personality so she turned into the bubbly character we see today. I've always wondered about the change, though. lol

Summary: She laughed for a long time, a bizarre, nervous laugh she couldn’t remember using before. But really, the idea of celebrating Jim’s departure was strangely hilarious.
Post "Casino Night".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1555 Read Count: 1729 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2007 Updated: November 03, 2007
Reviewer: analoggirl Signed 5
Date: November 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't believe that this story doesn't have more reviews. (I used to lurk before, but I registered an account just to write a review!) I suppose it's because we're now in season 4, and the preference is for Happy!Jam.

I thought you did an amazing job with this story, as it fits naturally in the storyline. I loved reading Pam and Michael's reaction to Jim's departure - especially when Michael retreats to his office. It reminds us of how sweet Michael really is.

Lastly, Jim and Pam's exchange at the end was beautifully written. I love how he holds her to him and gives her a kiss to the corner of her mouth. So bittersweet. Well done.

Reviewer: analoggirl Signed 10
Date: November 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think I screwed up your rating! Sorry. I choose 5 (because I normally see 5 stars.) Oops. Blame the new person. lol

Sleeping In by Ampay Rated: K+ [Reviews - 10] 4
Summary: A (brief) episode tag to Fun Run. What went down the first morning of season 4.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 510 Read Count: 4216 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2007 Updated: November 03, 2007
Reviewer: analoggirl Signed
Date: November 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Sleeping In

Aww, that was so cute.

Pam "missing" Jim when he's not in her presence actually makes sense. I always wondered why she put her head on the steering wheel while waiting for Jim to enter the car in "Fun Run".

Author's Response: Haahaa, that was TOTALLY unintentional :P, But now that you mention it, it is a huge possibility! Good call; Teamwork! WHOO! ::high-five::\r\n\r\nThank you very much for the review :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Pam refused to let Angela drop her off at home after the Dundies?

“I want to go to Jim’s,” Pam said, interrupting Angela’s thoughts.

Angela felt as though her head might pop off and land in one of her cup holders. Would the depravity of this night never end?


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19942 Read Count: 55158 ePub Downloads: 15
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2007 Updated: December 17, 2007
Reviewer: analoggirl Signed
Date: November 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A Bad Idea

What a great first chapter! I really hope that you're able to update soon!

You did a good job with Angela and I enjoyed reading her take on the situation. The conversation she had with Jim was great too.

Author's Response: Thanks! I have some homework tonight, but I fully plan on pushing it off until 15 minutes before I have to leave for class and working on chapter two instead :)

Summary: “Oh, come on, you look like a soccer mom. No wonder Jim used to like you.” Kelly preps Pam for yet another disastrous double-date.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Kelly, Pam
Genres: Humor, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1061 Read Count: 1871 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2007 Updated: November 04, 2007
Reviewer: analoggirl Signed
Date: November 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww, I love it. I love Kelly and her well-meaning attempts to "help" Pam.

Of course, Jim's comment makes the whole story. The banter between Jim and Pam was well done, too.

The Way I Am by LoveFool Rated: T [Reviews - 12] 8
Summary:

I know I do fluff, but this is fluffier probably than any fluff I've ever written. I think I've sickened myself...but it is what it is. I'm sure lots of you are familiar with the "old navy song" -- well Ingrid Michaelson sings it and it totally inspired this sugary bit of autumn spun fluff! Enjoy and make sure to brush and floss afterwards!

Spoilers through Branch Wars --kinda


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 866 Read Count: 3624 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2007 Updated: November 10, 2007
Reviewer: analoggirl Signed
Date: November 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Way I Am

That was beautiful! I loved it.

I liked the references to Local Ad, with Pam's desire to support Jim as he supported her. Hopefully we'll see a defined character arc for Jim in the forthcoming episodes, (strike permitting).

Author's Response: Wow, from your lips to God's ears. I am not going to be able to bear this strike...especially with such a wonderful arc looming on the horizon! Thanks so much for the feedback. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!