Penname: Little Comment Real name:
Member Since: May 19, 2008

Bio:
What's there to say? I'm 29. I live in a state shaped like a hand. I'm the proud mother to three cats and wife of my own personal Jim. I'm a huge dork, which is heavily reflected in my writing. I'm on wheels. Literally. I'm loud and easily amused.

Please do drop me a line sometime; I'm quite friendly.
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Reviews by Little Comment
Summary: New technology captured what was going through Jim's brain on the trip from New York back to Scranton.  Here is the transcription.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1615 Read Count: 3946 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2007 Updated: May 24, 2007
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10
Date: September 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Some Interstates are Best Traveled Westbound

wow. i can't say how much i adored this. okay, i can: a tremendous amount. i love when people get stream of consciousness right, and you got it so right. the internal debate, the questioning, the mentally attempting to control the green lights? all of it was perfection. great story.

Summary: With every break-up comes the awkward ritual of returning of each other's things. Here's a glimpse into those awkward moments.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3111 Read Count: 18644 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2007 Updated: July 29, 2007
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: A Favor

Oh my. This made me just ache to read, it was written so well. If I have to see them break up, this was the way. Utterly great.

I'm sorry; I'm at a loss for much more than gushing! :)

The Real Deal by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 45] 30
Summary: Past Featured Story

A first fight and a bowl of make-up spaghetti. (No spoilers.)

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2405 Read Count: 7565 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2007 Updated: July 26, 2007
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 9
Date: November 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i know this is an older story, so apologies - but like a rerun, i hadn't read it yet, so new to me! :) so amazing...i love the discomfort as they learn to communicate, the way you just nailed the pent-up fears and anger they have, and of course the sexiness of the make-up. fantastic and favorited, if i may.

Author's Response: No need for apologies - I'm happy you found this, and that it still held up for you. Back when I wrote it, there were lots of happy 1st date/early relationship fics, so of course I had to go and mess with it, lol. Anyway, thanks so much for your kind review, Little Comment - and being favorited is always flattering!

One Day by Wendy Blue Rated: T [Reviews - 353] 141
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim and Pam have 24 hours together before he leaves for Stamford. A lot can happen when you're on borrowed time.

Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28467 Read Count: 153445 ePub Downloads: 25
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2007 Updated: July 06, 2009
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed
Date: January 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: 7:00 PM

*contended sigh*

Oh man, the joy at finding this gem updated? Great, friend - the joy was great!

This chapter was just as real and fantastic as all those that preceded it, and boy did I smile when Pam returned. Just...yay. YAY.

I'm glad I didn't have to use the pout on you. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks friend! So so glad you enjoyed it. Yay indeed! Thanks for all the support :)

Breakable by LoveFool Rated: T [Reviews - 135] 52
Summary: Past Featured StoryYet another story inspired by a song by Ingrid Michaelson called Breakable. I really wanted to tell a story about people being just that -- breakable, and ultimately how grace helps keep us from falling apart. So yeah -- a nice fluffy holiday piece. ;-)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other, Roy
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Holiday, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15287 Read Count: 33474 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2007 Updated: November 20, 2007
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10
Date: January 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my...oh my.

So I'm way late to the party on this, but...oh my.

I'm going to be completely honest - I almost never read family-centered stories. Really, like never. Just not my cup of tea. But this...? This was...I don't have words. I was on the verge of tears while grinning the entire story, and my heart just ached but...

Dammit, I can't even write a proper review. LoveFool, you've done something amazing here, and it makes me want to be a better writer.

Summary: Past Featured Story

MEMBER'S CHOICE - It's Summer and Michael's calling him Jimmy. It doesn't matter because she's calling him hers now.

A look at Jim and Pam's relationship through names and the meanings hidden behind them.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1341 Read Count: 4130 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2008 Updated: January 20, 2008
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed
Date: September 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Beesly

oh, this was lovely. said so sweetly with so little. i think the word this former english major is grasping for is succint. sharp. you wrenched my heart just as well as you made me smile at the end. fantastic job. :)

Summary: "You've got a guitar."

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Fluff
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2009 Read Count: 2457 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 12, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2008
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 9
Date: September 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i thought this was really great. very intimate, detailed...loved the interweaving of lyrics with story, and the ending was NOT expected but really fantastic. favorited, if i may. :)

Author's Response: thanks! That means a lot--I love your stuff.

The Mob by Nightswept Rated: T [Reviews - 11] 6
Summary: A series of episodes to hold us over the summer hiatus: A new temporary worker is hired, and Dwight and Kevin have a funny feeling about the new employee. Phyllis and Angela are at war, and Michael is struggling with early fatherhood.

Possible spoilers for Goodbye, Toby.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Andy, Angela, Creed, Dwight, Ensemble, Jan, Jim, Kelly, Kevin, Meredith, Michael, Oscar, Pam, Phyllis, Stanley
Genres: Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5472 Read Count: 10847 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 16, 2008 Updated: May 17, 2008
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 8
Date: September 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: End tag

wow! i thought this was great! you really got each and every voice spot on, and even though it's in script form you write vividly and thus it's super easy to picture everything playing out. i'm definitely going to check out the rest of your episodes! so enjoyable!

Bravado by callisto Rated: M [Reviews - 22] 16
Summary: Pam discovers that going to school is a lot more complicated than she thought.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2717 Read Count: 5237 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2008 Updated: June 08, 2008
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10
Date: September 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: if love remains

oh wow. WOW. this was...so fantastic. so sharp and succint. you got their dynamic down so well, and there were a few parts that just HIT HOME:

I shook my head miserably. “I can’t do this.”

For a second he looked really alarmed, and then he glanced down at my Pratt brochure and the printouts of class schedules scattered over the table, and visibly relaxed.


how perfectly you captured what has to be jim's constant fear that things are too good to last. and this line? MELTED ME. and i am NOT a chick who melts easily...just the image was amazing:

He pushed his chair away from the table and stood up. “Don’t you know that everything I have is yours?” he said quietly.

and the proposal, the fact that nothing works out like they think it will...man. i envy this piece from first line to last. favorited, if i could be so bold?

Author's Response: Well, of course you can favorite it. I\'m honored. :) Good to know it was able to melt you. I dunno, I just like to think about the realistic aspect of things... I\'m willing to bet they won\'t bother addressing the money issue on the show. But that\'s what fanfic is for, right? :D

Summary: An AU set in Philadelphia in which Pam moves into Jim's apartment building. General spoilers up through the end of season 4 are subject to appear.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36219 Read Count: 50993 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: October 02, 2008
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10
Date: September 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Bruises and Bandages

oh, hey, dundie all-star, just stumbled on this story and found it interesting...

bah, i can't keep up this ruse.

you know i love this! angela's simple line about different kind of sin? kinda gave me chills, and whereas i'd usually just laugh at that, i thought it lent gravity to the scene. and for some reason, michael saying "no need for consternation" really made me laugh! and you know i love your callbacks, and dwight's here was no exception. fantabulous, dahling.

(i hope a 10 s a good rating...i'm new at all this.)

Author's Response: LOL you\'re ridiculous. Thanks for pointing out those two lines. I agree with you about the Angela one; it\'s funny because it\'s Angela thinking about sin (along the same lines of \"you shouldn\'t joke about that\" in Dinner Party), but it\'s also serious because Roy\'s basically beating Jim to a bloody pulp. Kinda one of those, \"haha... ohh\" moments. And as for Michael\'s line, \"consternation\" just always cracks me up, and so basically my only goal for this chapter was to get that line in there somewhere.\r\n\r\n10 is VERY good. :D

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim, Pam, and a series of bedroom conversations.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11819 Read Count: 36662 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 16, 2008
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10
Date: September 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: forgiving

all right, dammit...the way you just get them is a little too intimidating. this was amazing. sweet, sexy, sad, strained...sorry about the alliteration there. you struck such a fantastic balance between their openness, their fear, their reluctance, but most of all their overwhelming love.

simply outstanding.

Author's Response: Thanks LC. Hey, I love alliteration. I\'m glad you liked this; I really loved writing it and was pretty proud of how it turned out. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! :)

Week Days by Talkative Rated: M [Reviews - 106] 64
Summary: Past Featured StoryPost-The Job. Pam tells us about her week. A companion to "Week's End."
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: Week Days
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7276 Read Count: 49143 ePub Downloads: 14
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2008 Updated: July 24, 2008
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed
Date: January 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Thursday (Again)

Holy...how have I not read this yet?! This was just...GUH. I was going to claim the sixth chapter as my favorite...but then I read the seventh...and then THIS chapter? EFF. I adored this beyond words and am favoriting...now. Well, after I finish writing this. Then reading the sequel.

Inside Jokes by Talkative Rated: MA [Reviews - 127] 72
Summary: Past Featured StoryA golf pencil, two hot sauce packets, a Boggle timer, a mixtape, a high school yearbook photo, a card, and a teapot. Yup.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15300 Read Count: 37680 ePub Downloads: 13
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2008 Updated: October 22, 2008
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed
Date: September 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: 180

i think this is fantastic...it's a really unique handling of a popular idea (just what the heck is behind those nifty teapot gifties?). i love the way you deal with pam's uncertainty of just how she feels about jim - she's not head over heels, but she knows he's not just a friend, either. way to walk that fine line.

i'm definitely looking forward to the rest, so i'm hoping for an update soon. amazing work!

Author's Response: Say, it\'s one of our new guys! Thanks for the review, Little Comment, and I\'m glad you like this one. I\'ll be posting an update next week (I think).

Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 9
Date: October 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Nes Gadol Haya Sham

what a lovely way to finish this! your attention to detail is great. i love that you left the card to our imaginations - i think it takes a lot of skill to leave things unsaid but your reader so satisfied. this was a fantastic story and i so enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, Little Comment. I\'m pleased that you liked it and that you agreed with my choice to leave the card out (I was torn).

Summary: Our favorite couple makes some long-term plans. Set shortly after Goodbye Toby, and about as fluffy as cotton candy. Cross-posted on FF.net, so don't make the mistake of reading this hasty oneshot twice!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1593 Read Count: 3886 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2008 Updated: September 06, 2008
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10
Date: September 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh my...your finest "hasty one shot" EVER. EVER EVER. i truly lol-ed at "should i pause?" all the way through the ape babies bit, and just smiled all-too-knowingly at the rest, at both the tone and content. then i read the funny bits to mr. comment and lol-ed even harder, as did he. so so super fantastic. (i know this is a bit of a button, but you've rendered ME, of all people, speechless with this.)

Author's Response: Not a button at all! I\'m glad you shared with Mr. Comment; perhaps he\'s read it for himself as well? ;) Glad you liked the \"should I pause\"--I swear, I\'ve done that to Mr. All-Star countless times, which not only makes it funny, but totally believable (to me at least). Thanks so much!!

Summary: Kelly, Angela, Kevin, Andy, Michael, Creed, and Dwight all have their own firsts on the night of Toby's goodbye party. Spoilers for Goodbye, Toby.
Categories: Other
Characters: Andy, Angela, Creed, Dwight, Ensemble, Kelly, Kevin, Michael
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2036 Read Count: 1714 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2008 Updated: September 18, 2008
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 9
Date: September 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh wow, this was great. i think you captured each of these characters at pivotal (or in creed's case, just weird), moments. it was sweet, funny, sad...a perfect mix. really really well done.

Summary: Andy comes over, Dwight comes over, then Angela sleeps. A look at one night in Angela's life. Spoilers for Weight Loss. Rated T for implied sexual situations.
Categories: Other
Characters: Andy, Angela, Angela/Andy, Dwight, Dwight/Angela
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Weekend
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2400 Read Count: 2213 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 30, 2008 Updated: September 30, 2008
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 9
Date: October 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh wow...i think this is fantastic. such a realistic, complete look at this weird triangle, and you were fair to all three corners of it. great, great story!

Summary: Scranton, Pennsylvania, home to 28-year old receptionist, Pam Beesly. Pam’s array of plain, button-down shirts, drab skirts, and clunky boots make her bright and artistic personality fade into the background. Her coworkers have called in stylists Clinton Kelly and Stacy London to inject some life into her dreary duds, but will Pam be able to deal with the price of fashion? It will be style rejuvenation as Pam learns What Not To Wear.

Set in between seasons 3 and 4, so general spoilers for season 4 apply.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Crossover
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Adult language, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14486 Read Count: 42312 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2008 Updated: December 13, 2008
Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10
Date: December 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: EPILOGUE: After The Reveal

Oh darlin...this was just fantastic from beginning to end. This was a great way to wrap this up! Very sweet, but not in that shmaltzy way.

This was the best. Also I love you.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I\'m glad you didn\'t think it was too sappy. I was a tad worried about that, but you definitely convinced me otherwise. :) Thanks so much for the encouragement and wonderful reviews!!

Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: ACT VI: The Big Reveal

"...people certainly won’t be able to ignore me anymore. They’ll notice the confidence will be there too, a little more.”

This is so PAM at this point - I just love this line so much. It's like, you're almost there, almost at full confidence, and yet that "a little more" is so subtle...brilliant.

And hands down, Michael's TH-type deal was the BEST thing EVAH. Such a fantastic, perfect line. And SO FUNNY!

This is really great, babe...you're so on-point, mixing these universes together. Brava. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! I totally agree, like in Beach Games and The Job she was feeling a lot more confident than ever before but it\'s still not anything compared to what we\'ve seen her at in seasons 4 and 5, so the \"little more\" is definitely about her being the most confident she can be and not kinda trying to summon the courage. And I really didn\'t think Michael\'s TH would get such a big response, but apparently I did well! :) So glad you liked it. Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10
Date: December 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: ACT V: Hair and Makeup

Sweet and lovely and bonus: helpful tips! I'm so excited for her reveal...not just to see Jim's reaction, but everyone's. I just love seeing her happy. Yahoo!!!

*apologizing for button, yet again*

Author's Response: Thank you!! I\'m glad you\'re finding this educational as well as entertaining. ;) Hopefully I\'ll get the big reveal chapter up soon! /gets to work on her paper...

Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: ACT I: The Ambush

I LOVE THIS!!! God, you so got Clinton and Stacy's snark just right, even the differences between their voices. And Pam? Perfect. I love that this ishow she got her EPIC WARDROBE CHANGE...this is absolutely going to be part of TO canon for me, babe. This is absolutely perfect and I CAN'T WAIT for more!!!

Author's Response: Oh yay! Thank you so much!! I wonder if I\'ve just watched so much WNTW that I just know their voices (not unlike how I know the characters of TO). I\'m so flattered that this is going to be one of the classics already! Hopefully it\'ll be right on par with your Disney story (although nothing outdoes the Disney story). Thanks again!!

Reviewer: Little Comment Signed
Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: The Set-Up

LOVE. IT. Okay, so, I already told you I loved the sister line. Also adored Jim's cluelessness, especially in his little interview bit, trailing off into a question. And how could I NOT have figured out that Kelly started all this? So fantastic. I'm DYING for more...like, literally, I may die.

Author's Response: Thank you!!!! LOL how funny would that be if Jim was an underground fashionista instead of clueless? That would certainly put a different spin on the story. And please don\'t die waiting for an update. I don\'t think I could handle it. ;) So glad you liked it!!!

Reviewer: Little Comment Signed
Date: November 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: ACT IV: Shopping day 2

Aw, yay for ol Pammy, getting some new threads! I love that you're using examples of her FNWardrobe from the show but also expanding it in believable ways. It's great to see her feel like she deserves all this. It's all just SO GOOD AND FUN AND HAPPY.

I'm so embarassed by these buttons from me, babe, but you know if I'm in button territory I digs it. :)

(Note: 10!!!!!!!!!!! No need for revenge starring. ;) )

Author's Response: Aw, thank you dear! Yes, a button is a tell-tale sign that you enjoyed it. I\'m glad you especially like all her new clothing choices; that dress is my fave, and I\'m so glad I got to work it in. And YAY FOR HAPPY!!!! :D Thanks again!!

Reviewer: Little Comment Signed
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: ACT III: Shopping Day 1

And boom goes the dynamite. She's done it again, folks!

Fanfreakingtastic. That's all I can say. I just heart this so hard, man. And look at you and the visual aids for the win! You are too much.

This review is a button, but what can I say? I love it. Also, stop thanking me, ya crazy fool - I only wish I could take credit for your writing such a fun story. ;)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I\'m glad you\'re really enjoying it, especially the visuals. They are a nice touch. And of course I\'m going to thank you! If not for anything else then for keeping me motivated. You definitely deserve props for that. Thanks again!!

Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: ACT II: Learning The Rules

BONJOUR INDEED! God, I love the bonjour.

This is getting more fantastic-er by the sentence, miss. I'll admit that I had reservations about how this would read, and what a fool I am. It's wunderbar! (I know your love for me using that word.) You could always write Pam, but the fact that - as I said in chapter two - Clinton and Stacy are so damn perfect is just the best. I can't get over how much I adoooooore this story.

And face it, kiddo, no matter how many bitchy days you or I may have, we're a team. (And we both know my days outnumber yours to the nth degree.) ;)

Author's Response: LOL!! I love the bonjour too! Somehow I knew you\'d love that. (Using foreign language words are fun!!) I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying Stacy and Clinton. Really, they are so fun to write it should be a crime. Glad you think I\'m doing a good job with Pam too. Thanks so much for sticking with me on this!!