The Halpert's daughter is in love. But who is this boy she brought home? Is he good enough for Jim's little girl? Hijinks ensue...
10 I came across this fic today and absolutely loved it. I hardly ever laugh during fics, but this had me laughing out loud SO much, you captured Dwight's character perfectly
7 hey. Just came across this stroy. Any chance it's going to be updated? It's really good!
Author's Response: Yes it will be updated - I'm on a writing kick, so keep looking out! Glad you like! :) Thank you!
10 Just finished reading this fic. It's absolutely amazing. I really hope you update it sometime soon
9 wow. I hope this gets updated, interesting to see how Pam takes up Toby's advice. I like how it goes back to season 2 at their special moments
9 Hey just wanted to say I liked the idea of this fic, very clever and creative, but I think you were a bit harsh on Jim and made him out to be worse than he was, Pam's almost blameless is this fic!
But nevertheless genius thinking of putting it altogether
"It seems odd, in the ironic, slap-in-the-face kind of way that since her incident, it’s been easier to let him go."
Something bad happens to Pam. Very Dark.
10 Hey. Just want to say I love this story. I hope your problems are resolved soon and can't wait for the next chapters!
Response to the Summer Job Challenge:
The summer before Pam's Junior year of high school, Pam lands a part-time job answering phones at Anderson Realty.
This WAS a one-shot, but I'm having some writers' block issues with What They Don't Know...This is more to tide me over, but you're welcome to enjoy it!
9 hey i hope you update soon. i liked the chapters so far!
9 LOL I loved this chapter. Its great the way you have maintained Jim and Dwights humour. Can't wait for next chapter
Jim and Pam have 24 hours together before he leaves for Stamford. A lot can happen when you're on borrowed time.9 Great chapter. I like Jim being honest in this chapter. Can't wait for next one!
Ideas for Cold Openings (the pre-title gags) always pop into my head. So these will be just a bunch of teasers that, hopefully, you will find funny. I don't know how many I will post but I'll keep putting them up as they occur to me.
9 LOL haha loved the ending
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 Haha brilliant. Sweet and funny. If only we got these kinds of Jim and Pam conversations going in the actual show!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'d like to see a bit more sweetness between Jim and Pam as well... but they have to be careful with that. Then people will get sick of it. They do a good job, overall, I think. We\'ve seen some nice moments between them this season. Who knows what the season finale will bring?
Post-Benihana Christmas fic!
Remember when Jim and Pam convinced Dwight that a CIA helicopter would pick him up on the roof? Well, neither of them could resist showing up that night to see the prank to it's conclusion.
8 Thank you so much for updating. This is such a great story it doesn't deserve to be left unfinished! I'm curious as to what Jim says to Pam. Will he put himself on the line again, or will Pam be brave or courageous enough to take a chance herself. Can't wait!
Pam wanted to start a Book Club. Jim just wanted to have a gourmet meal.
9 Haha this was hilarious. Stanley's answers were so funny!
10 Just read this fic too, and love it. Hope you get around to updating this as well!
10 Hey hope you haven't forgotten about this fic. I Really like it and hope you update :)
10 LOL I love how you changed Emily's tone when she speaks to patients, it's so true!
Looking forward to the next one
Author's Response: Yep, absolutely true! It drove me crazy. It is especially bad with elderly patients ... Not that Larissa is elderly! Just an observation.
10 Wow, just awesome. What an amazing story. I think you described their feelings and actions post casino night perfectly, why they both did what they did. At first I was a bit annoyed at Pam for not phoning Jim herself rather than making him be the first to go out and make contact, but it all made sense with how she thought he was mad at her
Just want to say again what an amazing, creative writer you are
The Dunder Mifflin Company is vacationing on a Caribbean cruise. Jim and Pam are hoping for a romantic vacation but will Michael's outrageousness and some jealousy get in their way?
Takes place in Season 4 and is mostly focused on Jim/Pam.
9 I like how Pam is more confident being around kids now. Please say you'll be updating soon!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you like how I did that! And yes, I most definitely will be : )
Just wondering, any chance of an update? This story's too good to be left unfinished?
10 I absolutely love this story. I'm a big fan of AUs, especially of childhood ones, please please update soon!
10 Wow! What an intense chapter. I absolutely love this fic, and this chapter was one of the most absorbing yet. Hopefully now they'll finally be able to talk and put all this behind uthem. After 16 chapters of fluff I guess it was time for some angst right!
I found their behavior post-miscarriage very believable, and could feel for both at what they were thinking about the other dating someone else.
Thankfully neither of them fell for Roy or Kirsten (Btw any particular reason you didn't use a Katy?)
Looking forward to next chapter immensely, just hoping it won't be another 3 months ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much Noodles, it will not be another 3 months, I promise. This chapter really kicked my ass. I got some great gals on my side though, so I finally finished. I almost went there with Katy, but just decided not to. Thanks for reading and all your reviews.
NOW COMPLETE!!!
"Jim, why don't you tell Pam how you really feel?"
Jim and Pam deal with the stuff that comes with being on a hit show...talk shows, radio call-ins, and press junkets. They say there's no such thing as bad publicity, but is that really the case? Watch as Jim and Pam deal with being in the public eye and under the thumb of manipulative network producers. The story is told through interviews, transcripts, web pages and photos.
10 Really liked this chapter, brought a different kind of angle to it. I am a bit surprised that even after this time Pam is still very bitter, but I guess it shows how much it hurt her at the time, and maybe she's still feeling the pain.
I'm v.curious as to what happened between Jim and Pam, but this line is worrying me:
He pointed out to me that I was guilty of the same thing. Maybe that was the beginning of our end, so to speak
I hope I'm wrong :P
Author's Response:
Noodles--Thanks so much for your review. I really appreciate your feedback and I hope you like where theis story goes. Remember, in writing her letter, Pam is controlling her own story here. Is she telling the total truth? Is she letting her reader assume something? Maybe.
I'm interested in the fact that you think Pam seems bitter and I guess you are right. I was kind of going for her to be wary of the public and the media and longing to be left alone. Back on the beach, she told Jim that all she wanted was to live her life without eyes on her and I think that she still feels the same way.
Thanks so much for your review!!!
10 Wow. What an amazing chapter. Again, I just love this theme of reality TV, these cameraman trying to get all the best bits, it sounds so much like something that would actually happen!
Interesting to see what happens now, as so far they've been so much bolder about their feelings than in canon at end of season 2, so will things play out differently maybe? Can't wait, hope there's a quick update
10 Another great chapter. I find it totally believable that the story can go AU like this due to all the extra media attention. I loved the line by Anna on how she thought the producers could have prolonged it (to at least 5 seasons ;) ) had they not interfered.
Can't wait for next chapter :)
10 I've just read the whole story. I really like it, a very original and unique fanfic to say the least
In regards to the last chapter, I would just like to comment on their dialogue, and how its interesting that due to the effect of the reality TV effect, they are being more honest with each other, ie Pam acknowledging Jim's feelings for her, and Jim telling her he is transferring to Stamford.
I myself personally refuse to believe that Jim in the actual show left the day after Casino Night. He seems more mature and professional than that (ie he would have given a week's notice etc), so thank you for having him tell Pam that he's transferring to Stamford
I'm intrigued to see what Pam's reaction to all this will be. It's already different to what it was like in casino night, so maybe she will tell Jim she has feelings too? But since there's been mention of season 3, I have no idea! Which just goes to prove how well written this story is full of suspense!