Michael decides to take his sales dream team on a little trip and pulls Pam along for the ride. Spoilers through Cocktails.ooohhh! i can tell this is going to be a good one! i love the anger in it (how can a person love anger?!?), yet you can see flecks of romance along with it, a nice contrast.
i probably won't review for a bit, just reading, but it'll review again at some point for sure.
uh OH MY GOD! wow what an exciting chapter!!!!
you got it, i'm really split. so far i'm leaning towards liking ryan, because even though karen's acting so nice (what's with that? is she just drunk???) jim's still weird. but now they've forgiven each other, so i guess he's just too shy to say how he feels. by the way, just wanted to say somewhere, i'm so excited for the premiere this season!!
10 couldn't resist dropping a short review here. i am so delighted to see pam notice what kind of person jim really is. so realistic and completely true! just had to say that, and i'm going to finish then call it a day of reading. my favorite chapter of this story!
10 beautiful end, i think it made this story a lot better than i admitted in my previous review. great job with this one, and heather was a great addition to the mix. i'll be reading other work by you this weekend, when i have friday and monday off of school. i'm so excited!
10 ah, so cute. i definitely appreciated the frothy chapter, and i hate to say it, but i'm much more of a fan of the 2nd art show than this one. sorry, i just like how the first was more lightweight, more jim AND pam, than the two of them seperate. just a little honest feedback, and hope you don't take offense. ps. love tipsy pam, that's more like it! and i'd give you an eleven for this!
very nice, i think you definitely portrayed maj (michael and jan, oh crap, backwards is jam. oops!) very well. i'm running out of time her so i might pull out of reviews. great job though, and i'm excited to finish this!
i actually was expecting this. i think i have a extremely logical brain, so this seemed as realistic as possible for a fictional story. great job with that, and it's nice to see pam's reactions to the art, i like that she doesn't really care. that's great, actually!
10 i love lisa, good for her, that's just what they needed! that's all i'm going to say.
whew. that was intense, nice display of the anger, it was very well done showing both of their sides, i like how you didn't use any bias. i feel bad for both of them, but i really hate seeing pam so mad at jim. he does so much for her, and i know she loves him, but she can get really angry. a suggestion, try to show jim being angry at pam for something, but that's probably too late, you're already done with the story. nice job with this chapter, though!
i love the quick pace, yet still leaving attention to details, you certainly have a gift for that! i definitely do see a different pam in this chapter especially, she seems very independant and in charge of herself, but i'm not so sure i like it. i wonder what's going on now, though...
yay pam. i'm so glad to see that all these people have respect for her art, she certainly deserves it after putting up with all that shit from roy. though i do feel for jim too, it must be hard to come home from a day on the job not to be alone with pam as he wanted. great job, brokenloom, this is a great story!
10 ah. very nice. i love how you described jim's feelings of watching pam paint and her art in general. very well written (i love that i've never seen a typo in any one of your stories or chapters!!!) and i can't wait to read more tomorrow!
very nice. but what on earth does TWSS mean. i feel pretty stupid i haven't caught on yet. i think this was my favorite chapter so far of this story, great job!
wow! i can't even begin to tell you how much i enjoyed reading your slip-off-the-tonguely amazing one shot.
i don't think i have read a better written story so effortlessly written in pam's pov - all while summing up jim and pam's whole relationship in less than a thousand words! NICE!! kevin style!
i read another story by you just before this after i wanted to see what you'd written (i was interested because we both beta-ed safe by milkandsugar) and i am completely in love with your writing now. so much for anything else i have to do, i'm not getting up until i've read and reviewed everything you've written! great job with this. definately one of my top 3 stories!
10 oh my god, this was great. i love how angela has these talks with god, finally someone she'll listen to! great job with this, and i'm going to keep reading.
(p.s., i can't wait for the wedding episode, sadly i live in seattle and the episode aires the last here, so hopefully i won't see any spoilers until then!)
All the lights are changing red to green. From denial to truth in an enclosed space. Spoilers up to Cocktails. Hiatusathon request for Moxie. 10 oh my god! i stumbled upon this as i was looking through the titles, and i'm so glad it did! this was an amazing story, and PLEASE keep going. how do they decide which bathroom... then what... keep going, i'm begging you, it was that good.
10 hey, reviewing here! this is so great! I'm glad to see that pam realizes glen's a total jerk, aka like roy *shudder*, and I'm glad to see karen's out of the picture. anyways, please continue this! i know that this is really old, but i'm in an AU mood and i'd really like to see this finished, it's really good! please! thanks for considering!
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“God, Jim. There’s been an…there was an accident and…Roy came back and he got upset and…God, he shot Della Jim, Roy shot her.” And suddenly Jim’s not even breathing.
10 OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDD! (Sorry, If your religious, I didn't mean to disrespect you, but that was literally the first thought in my mind.) I can't believe this! I need to go to bed, yet this is too good... I'll read a little more.
You know your hooked when you can't go to sleep without finishing a fan fic!
10 YES! I'm going to bed now, but this was well worth the wait. Great job!
Five first kisses and one hundredth one...Oh my god, I just loved the ending. What a small world in Scranton, PA! So cute!
"It seems odd, in the ironic, slap-in-the-face kind of way that since her incident, it’s been easier to let him go."
Something bad happens to Pam. Very Dark.
10 PLEASE CONTINUE! I read this all in one sitting because it was so good, how is this your first story here??? I absolutely love this, the stories and just every aspect were so real - it was incredible. I really am evaluating all the good stuff I have in my life. This has been really helpful, so thank you.
Please continue, though. I know many people have asked you to do that and they're right. Please don't let this sit here untouched, it's too good to waste! Fantastic job with all these chapters, keep going!
sorry, i read the whole things without reviewing yet. it was great! i love how jim is always there for her, and he always know the right thing to do (but the porn...?!?! :0) man, i want a jim! great story!
Jim, Pam and a weekend in New York - set in the fluffy future. Not a spoiler in sight.
10 I HAVE NEVER LOVED A CHAPTER AS MUCH AS I LOVE THIS ONE!!!!!!!!!!! I am dead serious. It was great. Perfect writing and dialogue. Gloria is AMAZING, and Jim is such a perfect little soul. That was such a Jim thing to do, I'm so proud of him for doing that. BRAVO!!! I loved the last lines, ...*sigh* I'll find my own Jim some day... great job!
10 oh my god! that was great! this is officially my new favorite story! please continue it!