Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 
10
Date: March 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: This Is Forever Here Within Our Hands
Oh my goodness, I've just been reading this story in snippets these past three days, and I've absolutely loved this! There were a couple times I just wanted to shout and my computer screen and say 'just have them start kissing now!' - but I really applaud you for drawing out the conclusion. It reality, it actually wouldn't be drawing out the conclusion, as really, not that many people are gutsy and bold enough to just say how they feel every minute of every hour of the day. However, in the world of Jim and Pam fanfic, a lot of people feel that they want to just get it over with, and have them be together sooner rather than later. I have no problem with either approach, but as this is far less common, I really appreciate you being honest to what tends to happen in people's actual lives.
Now that I've got that part over with, let's move on to the actual writing and stuff like that. Let me just tell you, it was awesome and incredibly well done. You ALWAYS, and seamlessly transitioned from Jim to Pam's perspective in a way that... I don't know how to describe this... just makes sense, and feels natural to a reader. Also, I don't know where to draw the line between you and your beta, Starry Dreamer, but the grammatical and editorial area of things was just spot on throughout the story. I don't think I caught a single typo or anything like that.
So all in all, miss girl7, I just loved loved this story for everything that makes up what it is, and really, all of your writing, too. I think I'll be reading another one (or many, many more) of your stories over my spring break the week after next when I've got more time on my hands!
P.S. As the review alert feature seems to not be working these days, I'll also send you this review in a message, as I just want you to hear how much I loved this.
