Jim teaches Pam the finer points of basketball. She's a quick study.
10 steamy -and very AU -but wonderful! nice chapter!
Author's Response: Steamy - excellent. :)
A tiny little reflection on the most important day of Pam's life.
10 this was incredible. so much in so little. i love how we think at first one thing, but then it happens to be another. great writing style - very intriguing!
Author's Response: Old story, and old comment, but I still check! Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Jim, Pam, manicure.10 so sweet - i love the attention to their emotions as they painted each other's nails and also how jim protects her as todd packer becomes out of line. great chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad those undercurrents came through. Thanks, PMH!
9 Wow, I didn't think that they'd end up together! But they did, and it was great. Also, even though it was spur of the moment, it didn't seem too cheesy... well, a little cheesy, but Pam likes cheesy! Great job with that aspect, and great story!
10 so touching and romantic! what a cute idea - you are so thoughtful Par5 - what amazing stories you write!
beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you :)
10 WOW! okay, that was really cute, and then the ending is just so surprising, just WOW! very creative too, i loved the part about roy and the playful banter, so cute!
Author's Response: Wow, you commented over a year ago! I need to pop by more often...I'm so sorry! Thank you SO MUCH for reading and commenting and liking this little bit o'fluff.
Sometimes you double check to see if you can hear a dial tone.
Then again...sometimes you might be too distracted to bother. ;)
that was great. i love how mrs. beesly is on the other end of the phone! i thought it was a little weird how jim kept finishing all of pam's sentences, but it would only be weird if it was anybody else. great story. i'd love to see another chapter set maybe a year or two in the future. nice job!
10 whew. nice job there. the kids were great! it's so sweet to see that they're young yet still love their parents so much. great job!
Some musings from Pam, post-angst. Just for fun.10 Wow, that was sweet! Very well done, I love all this love!
For the Caught Red Handed and "Nobody knows" Challenges. Sometimes you're so distracted that you get careless and what you think is a big secret isn't such a secret at all. :)10 Wow, that was so well done! I love the style you used here, introducing the character and the setting then casually overhearing Jim and Pam. Nice job there!
10 AHHH, so beautiful. How is it that you read my mind some odd time ago and had JIM COME MEET PAM AT THE AIRPORT??? You are a genius beyond words and I think I'm in love with you.
Thank you for writing this piece of perfection. *sighs contentedly*
10 Oh my goodness, I was just going to ever-so-sneakily turn to the next chapter but that last line did me in. I just had to leave you a review - this is so good! Carol is such a wonderful mother and great idea for the story. I always love reading about Pam not going through with the wedding to Roy, and how she calls it off right at the church. Thanks for coming up with this idea and writing three chapters about it. I love long stories! I can't wait to read the next chapter, this is going to be good no matter what!
Immediately post-Casino Night, Jim finds comfort from an unexpected source. Response to the "Second Choices" challenge.
10 oh my god. that was so unexpected - but just lovely. jan and jim, huh? i kind of like that...
So this started in my mind as a little one shot (cue mocking laughter). Of course it expanded to a little more. It's pure speculation on my part, and is probably quite off. :o)
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
9 darn, this is so well written! i love the story idea, how you've taken from what actually has happened, and used a little bit of a creative license. great job with this. i do have to say i got a little confused with all the new scenes starting all the time. are these flashbacks, or all in a consecutive order. please let me know!
great new (to me at least) story, girl7, i love it and can't wait to see where it's headed!
10 wow. go michael. i love how serious he can be sometimes. sadly, though how it only happens once a year! i really wish this scene had been in the actual episode. and i don't think i've ever said that before to someone, so i seriously mean it. great job, and i can't wait to see what happens next!
10 um... wow! i started drooling after pam said jim way sexy. that is the power you have on me to fall in love with your stories, and the way you portray jim and pam in them. amazing. uh. girl7? i think i'm in love with you writing, and i'm sorry it's weird for you to hear that, but i just needed you to know, once.
i started writing that in the google search bar as i was half-way done reading this chapter. but wow. this is truly amazing. i don't think i've ever been so delighted and privileged to read a story before. so thank you.
and god, i want a jim! especially the one from this story. *sigh*
10 ahhhh. i just sighed an incredibly loud sigh. this is truly perfect. i love how funny yet romantic jim and pam are, it's just adorable. i'm having a really hard time here trying to explain how much i love this story. you said in this chapter how pam loved that jim had no idea how perfect he was? apply it this story. if you're married, pair how much i love this story to how much you love that person. ok, well maybe not that far, i don't think i'll marry this story, but really, this is just that good!
10 ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! this was the most perfect ending to a perfect story. i loved jonathan, and what the hell, every single word of this chapter, i think this one and the previous were the best. congrats, girl7, this is an absolute masterpiece.
This picks up pre-merger and is spoiler free, a bit AU as well. I began this back in October (maybe even September), and obviously the show has deviated quite a bit from what I speculated here.
This begins with angst, but there is a great deal of fluff, steam, smut, and silly...for several, several chapters. My idea was to go beyond the happy ending, so to speak.
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.10 oh my god. that was so amazing how you had jim propose there.... on the living room floor... wearing only his underwear. and how he was referencing sex and the city! just wow. also, i love the way you explain their never ending eye contact. but really, that proposal was awesome. the way they talked about it, how it didn't make either of them uncomfortable, all that good stuff. this is incredible! great job, girl7, and seriously. i must do my math!
i'm really confused here. it seemed like she was having second thoughts about leaving roy - then was roy kissing her at the end? can yo please explain to me? thanks.
ahhhhhhhhhhhh. incredibly loud sigh. this story is perfect. your writing is perfect. jim and pam are (now - lol) perfect. i think that's all i need to say.
10 oh my god, miss girl7. i don't think ANYBODY in the entire world would have thought to add this truly meaningful chapter to the story except for you. so just congrats, this was amazing.
10 um... miss girl7?... i think you have made my wildest dreams in terms of 'the most absolutely-fruitly-PERFECT-story-EVER. as in EVER, EVER, EVER! seriously, i am so addicted to this. i even loved the karen parts because i knew jim and pam would get together, and then even though they are now, i still have to keep reading because this is so perfect! and also, the old couple, even michael for crying out loud and especially jonathan are perfect people. also, (yes, another also) thank you for not giving in too soon and holding out with jim/karen, then jim resisting the dance with pam, then not letting her speak to him. also, also, also, the 'prank' on jonathan w/ the breakfast was brilliant. i saw it coming, but it was perfect. absolutely perfect story, and i can't wait to keep reading as soon as i do geometry homework, research on north korea, study spanish and write 2 more pages of my screenplay based on my bus driver. (he doesn't know i'm writing this, just ms. carroll, my teacher... lol - i don't even know the guy's name). i'm pretty sure i'll be reading before i'm done with all that, but i'll try to resist the temptation - it won't work. i swear.
okay, just to reiterate, this is pure perfect-ness!
10 okay, the nameplate says it all. this chapter was so touching in oh-so many ways, but michael's speech truly was great. nice job, it's going to be so sad to see this story end, but i bet you'll have written some pretty ass-kicking (hey, just quoting jim there!) vows for them! i'll keep reading, even though it's REALLY late!