Penname: DoomGoose Real name: Goose'du'oom
Member Since: December 03, 2019

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A bored IT guy.
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Rated: T [Reviews - 23] 15
Summary: "Pam always thought dying was supposed to be a peaceful transition from the real world to a place of light and beauty. She thought that she would die an old woman in the arms of her husband, not right after hearing her child cry for the first time."


Pam knows she needs to move on after death but can't bring herself to leave behind her motherless daughter and heartbroken, grieving husband.



Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Romance, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6700 Read Count: 10425 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2010 Updated: March 07, 2010
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: April 13, 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Help

Ouch, this story hits me right in the feels. I don't know if you're still around here to read this, but well done. The writing is great and o really like the concept.

Rated: T [Reviews - 42] 39
Summary:

 Like many high school sweethearts, Jim Halpert and Pam Beesly were sure nothing could ever break them up. And, like many high school sweethearts, life after graduation proved too much for their relationship to bear and they ended up going their separate ways. When their paths cross again 10 years later, old feelings are stirred up, but will Pam and Jim have a second chance at first love?


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Roy
Genres: Drama, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Travel, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16106 Read Count: 8014 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2016 Updated: May 02, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: May 05, 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Different But The Same

Had to do a reread on this one, it has indeed been a while. Of the two plots you've got going I'm definitely more invested in the "present," regardless the past plot gives some nice context.

Looking forward to the next update!

Rated: M [Reviews - 144] 123
Summary: It's 1963 and West Scranton High's new math teacher Jim Halpert has a secret. When it rears its ugly head and puts both him and librarian Pam Beesly in danger, how will he react? Will they be able to outrun his dangerous past or will his enemies catch up to him, once and for all?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Suspense
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43374 Read Count: 11604 ePub Downloads: 29
[Report This] Published: July 04, 2018 Updated: August 21, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: April 21, 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'll be honest I'm much more invested in the cabin plot than the espionage intrigue, but nonetheless, it's enjoyable all the same.

Great writing as always. Looking forward to seeing more!

Author's Response: Honestly, same. Sometimes I’m like “why did I make it a spy story when I just want to write them in a cabin?” Maybe a Little House on the Prairie AU next, lol. But I promise that the espionage stuff won’t take too much away from the fluffiness and cabin-esque stuff, and hopefully provide a good and gripping story in some chapters to come! We’ve had a lot of exposition after having action right up at the start, so we’re due for some action again soon! I hope you continue to enjoy, thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: May 13, 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Glad to see you back at it, thanks for updating!

I really liked how you portrayed Pam's shock at the situation, the mental disconnect with reality came across quite well.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you! I’ve never been in that situation and hope never to be, but I tried to think about how I’d react if I were in her shoes! I’m glad it read well and that you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: May 23, 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm definitely more invested in the spy drama now, so great work there! I liked the Angela nods from Phyllis and Jim, that was classic. Glad that Jim and Pam have confessed the depth of their feelings for eachother as well, even if the circumstances are dire.

Looking forward to seeing who's after Jim.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I enjoyed writing that little bit with Phyllis so much. I hope to reveal the mastermind behind it all soon, so stay tuned!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: June 20, 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Does Pam get to run him over without her glasses on!?

So I think it's safe to say we can infer that Ryan is the bad guy that Jim was talking about. And he must have a mole or Wallace really trusted him for him to show up here ... I really hope Jim doesn't get unceremoniously shot in his sleep or something here! Certainly a cruel cliffhanger, I hope to see more soon!

Looping back from speculation to the chapter itself, I really liked the tone you set with Pam's frentic flight, no destination in mind other than anywhere but here. The affirmed feels was of course a highlight of the chapter, always a winner.

Author's Response: Lol! Wouldn’t it be fitting if Pam did actually get to run him over with no glasses? Maybe I can work that in some how... Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Thank you so much for your compliments. I hope you kee enjoying!

Author's Response: Lol! Wouldn’t it be fitting if Pam did actually get to run him over with no glasses? Maybe I can work that in some how... Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Thank you so much for your compliments. I hope you kee enjoying!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed
Date: July 03, 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh no you didn't!

I don't think you'd kill Pam... which means that Jim or some saviour like a random Andy got back in the game and shot Ryan... or something. I'm really hoping Pam's alright, but being strangled isn't anything to scoff at either, so kinda already not-alright.

The mood of this chapter was palpable, we all knew it was going to go downhill fast at the end of the last one, and boy did this deliver.

I can't wait to see that Pam's mostly-ok.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I hope to not leave things dangling off the cliff for too long. I’m so glad this chapter delivered for you!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I liked the parallels you made in this chapter to The Job, it was a really nice tie in. Of course, Jim turning down the job to be with Pam was a wonderful moment. I look forward to seeing you wrap this one up, it's been a wonderful adventure!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad you think so!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: March 09, 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good to see an update to this! I had just marked it read and moved on a couple of weeks ago. I am really enjoying it so far, keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks for not giving up on me! I'm so glad that you have been reading and enjoying. The muse is back in full force and I promise to see this one through to the end! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Rated: M [Reviews - 27] 28
Summary:

Pam, Dwight and company scramble to uncover what happened to Jim, while Jim engages in mind games with his reluctant but unstable captor in hopes of being found alive. 

WARNING: THIS IS DARK AND EMOTIONAL. CHECK NOTES AT BEGINNING AND END OF CHAPTERS FOR WARNINGS. Mod Note: Graphic Drawing in Chapter 4


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Suspense
Warnings: Adult language, Other Adult Theme, Possible Triggers, Secondary Character Death, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 77580 Read Count: 9240 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: December 03, 2018 Updated: May 02, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: April 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Transcript: Victim Impact Statements

I've finally had the courage to open my browser tab and read this one. This story has been a very emotional read, and your writing of it has been phenomenal.

The most recent chapter with the witness statements was a nice recap and even if the conviction is not stated it gave a nic sense of closure.

I look forward to reading more of this or any other stories you choose to write.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: May 02, 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Finale

Great job, this was a great way to finish out the story, I really liked it. When Erin and Co. arrived I admittedly had a little trouble discerning who was speaking at some points, but overall the chapter was excellent and the end left me smiling.

Rated: T [Reviews - 50] 56
Summary:

Pam and Jim’s friendship is fragile and their hearts even more so, will a Christmas time prank on Dwight be just the thing they need? 

Canon divergent after A Benihana Christmas. For the Secret Santa Fic exchange

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Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Dwight/Angela, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Holiday, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: Secret Santa Fic Exchange 2018
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13418 Read Count: 9747 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2019 Updated: December 31, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: April 17, 2020 Title: Chapter 4: One Kitchen Apartment

I almost missed this one in most recent! Very nice to get an update for this, I had marked it read and forgotten about it.

I loved the cookies, it was very cute. One can't hope bit think that somehow Jim got a chance to read that letter, but I guess we just have to wait and see.

Rated: M [Reviews - 48] 46
Summary: Feature

The documentary crew is about to start filming but they need an actress undercover, to make things a little interesting. Pam wants the long term job, only it'll prove much harder than she thought, especially in terms of not getting involved with the subjects.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26286 Read Count: 7405 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 12, 2019 Updated: August 25, 2021
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Date: July 03, 2020 Title: Chapter 6: The boom operator, drinks and a newcomer

I don't hate Brian... but also I have to register my objection on behalf of JAM! This is a pretty believable scenario, I just don't want to watch it play out, it hurts my jammed up heart. I look forward to things reaching the breaking point.

Author's Response:

Well, I'm a sucker for happy endings and a hardcore JAM shipper so, hold in tight.

Thanks a lot for reviewing! 

Rated: M [Reviews - 146] 95
Summary: As WWII rages Jim is sent to England to serve as a fighter pilot. He and Pam send each other letters as conflict arises in the skies above Europe and back on the home front.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 178264 Read Count: 13299 ePub Downloads: 24
[Report This] Published: April 27, 2019 Updated: November 19, 2021
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: October 05, 2020 Title: Chapter 22: October Rain

I loved the letters as always, they're some of the highlights for Mr in this story.

Danny as a creep definitely checks out, glad Pam got out of that situation alright. Him turning up as the new logistics boss... Less fortunate. Definitely looking forward with interest into how that all plays out.

Great job as always, an all-round excellent chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks DG. The letters are fun since it's their only way to banter with each other right now. The Danny thing is something I've been planning for a while. Glad to have you hear for it.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: September 01, 2020 Title: Chapter 21: Black Thursday

Some nice classic bits of levity with Andy's wall punch and Ryan's new office in an otherwise pretty dark and intense chapter. Roy and Jim seem to be crawling towards an inevitable reveal that they're in love with the same woman, and Dwight gets a promotion, but in the worst way imaginable.


You know with a checkovs gun hidden in there like that, you might just have a guy hoping that Jim and Pam might end up on the same continent with the secretary comment.

This was a really long chapter indeed, but k still look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks DG. Even though this is set as AU as it is, I still want to try and pull in as much from canon as I can. Glad that all worked out for you. Sorry to get your hopes up about Pam getting out to England. I've already done her appearing out of nowhere behind a secretary desk once in this fic, to do it again might be a bit much.

Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed
Date: July 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Summer's End

I was so happy to see this opening with all of those letters, I love that we still get Jim and Pam interactions even across all that distance. Again with the painting a picture with words, the baseball game drew me in yet again. The ending with Helene going staticus dramaticus was unfortunate, and I feel for the 'kids' there. It's never fun to have to feel like you need to take sides in something like that.

Another great, long, and entertaining chapter, you've 'hit it out of the park' yet again as it were ;)

Author's Response: Thanks DG!

Glad you're enjoying everything and that the visuals are all clear. It's a bit of a challenge to still have JAM banter when all they have right now are letters and there's a big time difference between sending and recieving on both ends. Glad you're liking it though.

The home stuff is yes unfortunate, but also a way to tie this story back to canon.

I'm very glad you thought this chapter was a home run.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: May 23, 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Fortress Defense

You have great skill in painting pictures with words, I was rarely lost in the dogfight while reading it, and maybe I just watched too much history Channel growing up but the way you described their movements worked for me really well.

I'm glad Ryan got put in his place, screw that guy.

Looking forward to seeing how Andy fits in. Also, Tim? Isn't that the Jim equivalent from the UK office? If so, nice nod there, look forward to seeing how that plays out.

Author's Response: Oddly enough watching and re-watching episodes of History Channel's "Dogfights" has been a main source of research for me for this fic. Especially the episodes highlighting P-47's and P-51's.

Yup Tim is the equivalent of Jim from the UK Office. It's been a story element I've been planning for a long time so it's a lot of fun to bring out.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: May 06, 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Who's On First

As someone who has never really played or watched baseball, you do a great job of painting the picture of the game and making the reader care.

Your characterizations and dialogue are great as ever, I look forward to reading more. 



Author's Response: Thanks DG. One of my favorite authors once said about writing; "Paint a picture with words." Glad to see that approach has worked for you.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed
Date: June 09, 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Songs from Home

This chapter was a delight, I could almost hear the stomping and clapping in my head while reading this. Now I have to go listen to all the songs. The rivalry turning to song was a fun twist, I half expected an all out brawl.

Author's Response: Thanks DG. That was exactly what I was going for. A lead up to possibly a bar brawl, but then they break out in song. Glad you liked it. Hope all those songs get stuck in your head like they have been in mine for months now.

Rated: K [Reviews - 45] 39
Summary: Jim chronicles the adventures of two weeks spent looking after baby Cece.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Cece Halpert, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Kids/Family
Warnings: None
Series: Jamie and Morgan
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18969 Read Count: 7597 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2019 Updated: May 29, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: May 29, 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Back to Work

A good wrap up, very cute. Had me smiling pretty much the whole way through. Thanks for writing this!

Author's Response: Thank you. It was a lot of fun to write this. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.

Rated: T [Reviews - 62] 54
Summary:

After the events of Casino Night, Pam is adrift and Jim is anchored. 

A spin on early Season 3 that relies far too heavily on nautical imagery and references to Titanic... 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: In Stamford
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24362 Read Count: 8875 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2019 Updated: February 16, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: February 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm happy for the ending, but sad that the story has ended. You did great job on this one.

Author's Response: Thanks DG! I appreciate it. I’m sad it’s over, but happy I finally got past all my procrastination to finish it too!  

Rated: K [Reviews - 84] 44
Summary: A Regency AU Jam story. 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: Another Decade
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36378 Read Count: 6009 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 03, 2019 Updated: May 03, 2020
Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: May 03, 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue

Well done, that was a nice ending. And done worry about your writing, it's great. We all suffer from the imposter syndrome sometimes, it's hard to shake.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: April 27, 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Glad that Pam finally got the Jim, sad that this means the story has run it's course. Great job all the way through, I really enjoyed it.

Looking forward to how you wrap this all up.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed this journey! 

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: April 13, 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That is quite the tightrope you have Pam on here.

I hope Jim is picking up what Pam is putting down.

Author's Response:

Oh, he is, he is :)

Thank you! 

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1
Date: April 20, 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well done, the salon room intrigue and all the baseless accusations was a highlight for me. Of course the closing of the chapter was as well, how could it not be. I for one hope jimothy heard all of it and gets his act together, bit I suppose we'll just have to wait and see.

Great writing, as seems standard around these parts.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! To be honest, I also have no idea how much Jim heard... but, for sure, he heard enough ;)