Post Casino Night AU where Jim goes to Australia, and Pam follows.
1 Glad to hear you are well! Also glad to see Pam finally on the ground and preparing for the hunt! I wish her good luck, cause that is some needle in the haystack business right there.
Author's Response: Thank you! It is indeed, but it's only so large a haystack, since I've decided neither of them truly gets the concept of public transportation, so it's all on foot...
Ah! Sic em Pam!
I'm glad to see they're close to making contact.
Author's Response: Contact ahoy! Thanks for the review :)
1 I'm glad things are looking up here. Your writing is great as always, nothing ever jumps out to trip me up while I'm reading this, keep up the good work. Somehow you always manage to get these out just as I'm settling in to read before bed, so cheers to that too.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate that. I hope this latest one wasn't too late for you...
1 I'm a sucker for fluff I've discovered,angst is not my speed. So I am enjoying these recent chapters heartily. Keep up the good work, the writing is great as usual.
Author's Response: Me too. I'm a decided fluff person. Thank you!
1 Uh oh. Are they sending Dwight?
Another just in time for bedtime reading update... Though to be fair I pretty much read all day now.
Author's Response: I also write these before bed, so that seems like a non-coincidence. I hope you are enjoying! Thanks for the review.
1 I suspected, and was correct! It's a small world after all.
I really liked the banter this chapter. Tired Pam is always cute.
Author's Response: Good guess! I really wanted to tell all of you who guessed it that you were right, but I figured finding out would be more fun. Thanks for the review!
Excellent as usual. Looking forward to the next installment.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's up now.
Just what the doctor ordered, a shot of fluff before bed!
As much as I don't like angst, I am looking forward to seeing Pam unload the emotional burden that she's been carrying.
Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Well, it will happen, but not quite yet. More fluff soon! Thanks :)
I'm looking forward to the Stamford resolution. Is it rude for me to wish harm or calamity upon fictional characters? I'm thinking the Stamford receptionist could do with one.
Author's Response: That's a good idea. Let's see if they come up with it ;). And thanks for the review!
I feel like Ryan would have been good at Jan's job if he didn't get caught up in the drugs. It'll be interesting to see you spin him into the ARM job.
I can already see the easy sell to Ryan now: There is no clingy Kelly in Stamford, and mo money.
Looking forward to more!
Edit: big thumbs little buttons strikes again.
Author's Response: I think you're right. But then again, drugs are a danger to him at Stamford too...thank you for the review!
Eyyy! Looking forward to bring out of the tunnel as it were. Good work as always!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it :)
I for one will be the first to admit that I'm just here for the fluff! I appreciate not uprating.
I like how the plan is all coming together, it will be nice to see it all tied up!
Author's Response: I am glad, since I don't like uprating. And thank you!
Or as Michael would call it, the J Situation.
I enjoyed the duel, although Ryan didn't know that it was, so he didn't get to fight back.
And of course always the fluff at the end. Always appreciated.
Edit: Reapostee because mobile hates me and autocorrects everything wrong.
Author's Response: Ironically this time autocorrect didn't correct "reposted." But thank you!
Hook, line, and sinker. The two master manipulators of the office face off. Tune in next time when we find out... Who. Is. Deadliest.
I have no clue why I'm reviewing in the format of deadliest Warrior.
Author's Response: I think we all know who is deadliest. Thanks for the review!
You impress me every chapter with the quality of your writing. Jim and Pam always feel so in character and this chapter is no exception.
I really enjoyed how you described the moment of Pam leaning against Jim as just being, because to me it was like "Pam, this is what was missing, this is what a healthy relationship feels like".
Keep up the good work, and hats off to you for managing to get daily updates out.
Author's Response: Thank you! As you can see some of the updates are getting shorter ;). But I find it actually helps to keep to the schedule, so that I keep up momentum.
I really enjoyed the back and forth in this chapter, and the ending line was a jem.
Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoyed writing it :)
You were indeed in time for bedtime yet again.
One does wonder why Dwight rarely fact checks Jim with a quick google.
Enjoyable and well written as always. Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you! And I think Dwight enjoys the game as much as Jim...
Why do I feel like the Polly section was aimed at me 😂. Looking forward to seeing how Jim jimmies the paperwork to get out of this one.
Author's Response:
Let's not say aimed at: let's say inspired by. I hadn't thought of it, and I wanted to dismiss it so I could get to what I had thought of (it was a good idea though!). Thanks :)
Short but sweet. Not really much else to say about this one. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! We'll have more meat soon, I promise!
1 Didn't see that one coming! Although to be fair the swap is one of my favorites in the fandom, it just always makes sense given what we get to see on the booze cruise.
I look forward to the conclusion. Hopefully Pam doesn't get frostbite or hypothermia.
Author's Response: Glad I could take you by surprise :) And yes, wouldn't it have been cool if Roy had ended up with Katy on the show? I would have loved to have seen that wedding! Thanks for the review. The conclusion is up now.
I love a good happily ever after. This story was well written and filled with great moments. The Jerry and Stella, Jim and Pam echo was a nice touch, if a little predictable. I especially liked the callback to Katy's line from booze cruise at the end, that tied it all up very nicely.
Author's Response: Thank you! And I almost always write happy endings. So glad you enjoyed this fic.
'Cause I've spent a thousand nights
Lost in your emerald eyes
Lost in a place where I know you can see my soul
A fluffy song fic to Emerald Eyes by Anson Seabra.
1 The story seems to repeat, you may want to fix that!
Otherwise it was good, I liked it. On a more mechanical note, I'd suggest using the line break built in to your word processor instead of making your own. As a mobile user id appreciate it, as an unbroken line of text does not wrap on mobile.
If you can't find the line break in your word processor,it's also available in the tinyMCE editior.
Author's Response:
Fixed the repeating issue, thanks for letting me know about that! I don't know how that happened lol. I'll try the line break tool, I've never used it but I'm sure I can figure it out.
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!! (:
1 Brought a smile to my face, I liked it.
The dialogue in the middle seemed a little off to me, the shift in mood there was a bit jarring.
Overall though, great job, and I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed the chapter and that it made you smile, honestly it is some of the best praise I think anyone can hear. I apologise for the dialogue in the middle, it has been over six months since I have last written and I am hoping to improve on it over the few chapters, but I appreciate you giving me a goal to work towards. I'm delighted that you are looking forward to reading more. Thank you!
Michael inadvertently attempts to smooth things over between Pam and Jim. Who would want two of their very best friends to be miserable after all?
Set after The Convention.
1 Can never have enough fixer uppers, I love 'em.
A mechanical note: something you've done formatting wise is not playing nice with the text size on the site here. Reading this on a phone was difficult.
Author's Response: Thanks DoomGoose! I have no idea with the formatting! I’ve always found it tricky (& vastly unpredictable) on here. At the moment, I’m writing everything on Google Docs & mostly using my phone to post. My laptop is on deaths door & Word only opens every now & then... Any wisdom would be appreciated!
1 That was a great finish, I especially liked Michael's perspective at the end, it was wonderful.
Author's Response:
Thanks DG! I’m glad the Michael finish hit the spot. I really loved the idea of him thinking it was all because of him.