Reviewer: 3vasectomies Signed 1
Date: August 17, 2020
Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81: The Job, Part 2 (Finale)
I've recently rewatched some episodes of The Office (thanks to quarantine) and it reminded me how mush I enjoy watching Jim and Pam's relationship. While hanging around the site I noticed this story, and I have to say I'm thoroughly impressed after reading it through.
Everyone here was certainly in-character, despite being in different places then they were in canon. Pam taking initiative was smart, knowing how passive and upset she was post-Casino Night, it'd be natural that she would be the one to pursue him and begin her "Fancy New Beesly" phase early. Jim having to regain some confidence in himself was necessary; her sudden presence and her confession of love is, to him, far too good to be true and he began overthinking everything. Naturally, their banter and established repertoire got them to a place of healthy communication and understanding. And while this was no doubt just good times, I'm glad you didn't shy away from necessary conversations like Roy or Stamford.
The added significance of certain elements both exclusive to this AU and in canon was really well done here. The caricatures, the Sydney attractions, and their teaming up for him to return to Scranton were all great defining moments of their relationship. I especially appreciated the reincorporation of the Casino Night dress and the cruise, as well as the redone art show scenario, keeping the tender Michael moment (which he definitely needed after Ryan humiliated him).
Speaking of supporting characters, the obvious standout here is Karen. I always liked Karen, and though I was happy that JAM got together in S4 Jim handled that relationship poorly. Her becoming friends with both parties was something I wanted to see, especially after "Lecture Circuit". Everyone else was... well, themselves. Kelly's portrayal was far too accurate, Ryan's motivations were well presented (I especially loved the Office Max bit) and though I prefer the "downward spiral" Jan, the professional and understanding Jan of this story (and S2) was great. I also liked that there was no violent Roy, he was never told what happened during Casino Night so why would he need to burst in and get pepper-sprayed? Besides, by the time the documentary would air he would have already found love again.
The final three chapters were my favorite, mostly because they were my favorite S3 episodes. The coal walk, the fountain, and the friendly competition between Jim and Karen were fun to see in a new context. And, with fics like these, I always like to imagine what would happen next in this alternate timeline.
Jim getting that promotion opens up a world of possibilities. Michael would just fully support him like the dad he is (and Jim in return), Dwight's dog-like obedience will mean he'll show Jim respect and everyone else would just be happy when he comes visit (besides Angela, but she's rarely happy). Knowing Jim, he will definitely play his cards right (even if he doesn't think he will) leading DM to further success, likely preventing the Sabre buyout (Though I could see Jo and Gabe as the faces of a competition between the two companies); a far cry from Ryan's "DM Infinity" plan, which I could see something very similar happening to Office Max and him being besmirched and arrested and then returning to his temp job. The ultimate irony. I can also see him uplifting others, like having Karen promoted to B.M. of Utica, and giving Dwight his due by convincing Michael to make him an official A.R.M. leading to both him and Jim making amends (just like Germany and Italy). I am surprised he's deciding to stay at Dunder-Mifflin full time, omitting the possibility of him joining Athlead(p) (though he could still be able to help fiscally). However, I can see him becoming more fulfilled and better happy with the company, especially after this promotion and with Pam. Speaking of which, she would truly fulfill her dream as an artist far sooner than in-canon, and with somewhere like New York which is an art zeitgeist, the world is her oyster. Though I can see her missing her Dunder-Mifflin family and catching up on all the gossip from Phyllis (because Kelly would be an endurance test). And post-S4 characters being introduced earlier like Erin (one of my faves) as the new receptionist.
I love imagining what remains the same, too. The "Gambler" and "Flintstones" singalongs, the trip to Niagara for the wedding (though *slightly* less chaotic and no Chris Brown), the weekend at Schrute Farms (resulting in Jim's heart-to-heart with the heartbroken farmer), Holly being transferred (which Jim would try to prevent), Michael's final Dundies and eventual farewell, and the infamous dinner party (my favorite episode as one could guess).
Apologies for the novella, I get like this with fanfics I genuinely enjoyed. Thank you for creating an interesting but realistic take on all these characters. Well done!
Author's Response: Never apologize for a long review. There's nothing better than seeing someone engage with and respond to the work you put into a story (at least, I don't think there is). This review was a pleasure to read.
I'm particularly glad you liked my revised S3. That was the part of the story I was least confident in, for two reasons: first, it could easily be seen as self-indulgent (it's basically just all the things I wish we'd gotten to see--I am myself a huge fan of Karen-as-friend), and second, I wasn't sure how much of the positive response to it was a result of people having simply gotten used to reading this story every day, as opposed to it actually being good storytelling. So to have you, coming to it after it's finished, telling me you enjoyed it was lovely. And yes, I agree with your takes on where this might have gone afterwards. I'll even add that founding Athlea(d)(p) might have been easier if Jim had had more executive experience (certainly people would have been more willing to invest!). Thanks so much for reading!