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Summary: A Pam/Jim AU - loosely inspired by 'Something Borrowed'. 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126427 Read Count: 37190 ePub Downloads: 21
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2020 Updated: February 06, 2021
Reviewer: Moonstream05 Signed 1
Date: March 11, 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I've already read this story once, but it's just so good.

I think this chapter just hurts me a lot, because they both obviously have feelings for each other, they just take the opportunity given to them, and flip it around.

Honestly, I just want to bang their heads together, maybe even more than I do in the first three seasons.

:) 



Author's Response: Thank you so much, that’s really kind of you to say! I’m so glad you enjoyed it :) And yes haha, I think I might have made them even more useless here than they were in those first three seasons...I figured a younger Jim/Pam might be even more clueless, lol. Thanks so much again for taking the time to leave a review, I really appreciate it! 

Reviewer: Moonstream05 Signed 1
Date: March 13, 2021 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Really enjoyed this chapter.

Michael being completely oblivious and supportive of Jim, while also being already overly attached to him, is so Michael.

(Also, kinda, really hoping the next HR person is Holly)

And the whole thing where basically everyone is excited for Pam's Paris adventure, including Pam, but she is very nervous at the same time, was so in character and brilliantly done.

And the whole last exchange with Jim and Karen was amazingly done.

Basically I just really love this story. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so pleased to hear that :)

(I can also confirm I did write this thinking the next HR person would be Holly, haha. It's time for Michael to break free from Jan). 

I actually (weirdly) enjoyed writing all of the Jim and Karen fights in this one, so that's really great to hear. Thanks so much again for taking the time to leave feedback!   

Summary:

‘He’s not going to use her for a story. He’d known within seconds of seeing her sneak to that garden door like a lifeline, within seconds of slipping out after her, that he wasn’t going to do that.’


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146686 Read Count: 19847 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: March 06, 2021 Updated: July 30, 2021
Reviewer: Moonstream05 Signed 1
Date: March 14, 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I really like how you've portrayed Pam and Jim's relationship in this. They were childhood friends, but instead of going for they immediately 'click' again, they are very closed off towards each other and perhaps Pam has a bit of resentment towards him?

I also don't know why, but I was really confused on who K.F was, until I remembered "Oh yeah, Karen."

I also really like Dwight and Angela's interactions and relationship and it's very much like canon, where Angela slaps Dwight, and Dwight comparing her to animals.

Anyway, really enjoyed this chapter.

:) 



Author's Response: Thank you so much!! And yes haha, I don't think I've ever really thought about Karen's initials before this point...Really glad you're enjoying the Dwight/Angela, I do love them :) Thanks so much for reviewing! 

Summary:

Pam has a crush on the newly hired paper salesman. Her annoying coworker offers to help her make a move.

(AU) They all still work at Dunder Mifflin but the story is not faithful to canon.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114889 Read Count: 18615 ePub Downloads: 12
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2021 Updated: January 31, 2024
Reviewer: Moonstream05 Signed 1
Date: March 26, 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Best Pizza in Town

I really enjoyed this chapter, the contrasting Cugino 'dates' were great. 

I'm also really liking this Jim here, like how even when he first met her, he was very encouraging of her art, and that he knew a lot more about her and Roy's relationship than he let on. I am also very intrigued onto why he left Philadelphia and Athlead, so I'm really excited to find out more about that. I also like how he is still very supportive of her now, and that he stopped laughing and tried to comfort her when he saw she was put down.

I also really like Pam here too, she seems to be calming down on her 'hatred' and seems to be going for a more laid back disdain. And her opening pick up line was brilliant, that had me laughing quite a bit.

Also Jim choking about Michael and Dwight saying those things was great.

I also kinda hope that this newly developed Jim and Pam friendship follows through to the office.

Anyway, I'm really enjoying this story so far, it's really interesting and entertaining!

:) 



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

The first date was really a play on how sweet Jim can be and his intentions were entirely pure. What I did want to show on the second date was he really does care for her on a certain level. He just has his own douchey way of showing it.
 
With Pam, I think she doesn't hate him as much as she lets herself believe. Granted, she really does think that he's a douche but she has a soft spot for him.
 
We'll see how long I can keep this friendship up *wink*